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Task A: Fix mistakes and make improvements.
Key Stage 1
Year 1
Computing
The instructions for this task say, "Look at the sentence below. How can we edit this sentence? Fix the mistakes and make improvements." Okay, our sentence reads, "on Saturday, we will go tto thebeach." So I'm noticing some spelling mistakes here, some typing mistakes. Let's go through from the beginning and see what we can fix. So what needs to happen here at the beginning of the sentence? It's missing something. It's missing a capital letter. So I'm gonna click here to move the cursor. I'm gonna do Backspace, and then I'm going to do a Shift, then I'll hold it down to make a capital letter O. So that O now is correct for the "On saturday." Saturday needs something too. Saturday is a name, so it also needs a capital letter, so I'm gonna Backspace the small s, hold down the Shift, and make a capital S. So "On Saturday" is looking good. "On Saturday, we will go tto-" The spelling of "tto" is not quite right here. I think there's been a typing mistake, because "tto" should be "t-o". So I'm going to take that one away. (Backspace taps)
That looks better. And then "thebeach" doesn't look correct. There's something about "thebeach." I wonder if you can see it. Yes, there should be a space here, after the word "the," right there where the cursor is. I'm gonna do space bar to put a space in. And then at the end of the sentence, what comes at the end? A full stop. So the full stop on the keyboard is there. So let's read the sentence again. "On Saturday, we will go to the beach." There we go. If I wanted to use some formatting to even improve the sentence, I could decide that I want to bold or underline some of the words to add emphasis to make them look special or stand out. So I think "the beach" would be the most exciting thing in this sentence. So I'm gonna click and drag over "beach" so that it's selected. And then I'm gonna go up to B for Bold at the top, and I'm going to make "beach" bold so that it emphasises that word. There we go. My sentence has been edited and improved.
Task A: Fix mistakes and make improvements.
Key Stage 1
Year 1
Computing
The instructions for this task say, "Look at the sentence below. How can we edit this sentence? Fix the mistakes and make improvements." Okay, our sentence reads, "on Saturday, we will go tto thebeach." So I'm noticing some spelling mistakes here, some typing mistakes. Let's go through from the beginning and see what we can fix. So what needs to happen here at the beginning of the sentence? It's missing something. It's missing a capital letter. So I'm gonna click here to move the cursor. I'm gonna do Backspace, and then I'm going to do a Shift, then I'll hold it down to make a capital letter O. So that O now is correct for the "On saturday." Saturday needs something too. Saturday is a name, so it also needs a capital letter, so I'm gonna Backspace the small s, hold down the Shift, and make a capital S. So "On Saturday" is looking good. "On Saturday, we will go tto-" The spelling of "tto" is not quite right here. I think there's been a typing mistake, because "tto" should be "t-o". So I'm going to take that one away. (Backspace taps)
That looks better. And then "thebeach" doesn't look correct. There's something about "thebeach." I wonder if you can see it. Yes, there should be a space here, after the word "the," right there where the cursor is. I'm gonna do space bar to put a space in. And then at the end of the sentence, what comes at the end? A full stop. So the full stop on the keyboard is there. So let's read the sentence again. "On Saturday, we will go to the beach." There we go. If I wanted to use some formatting to even improve the sentence, I could decide that I want to bold or underline some of the words to add emphasis to make them look special or stand out. So I think "the beach" would be the most exciting thing in this sentence. So I'm gonna click and drag over "beach" so that it's selected. And then I'm gonna go up to B for Bold at the top, and I'm going to make "beach" bold so that it emphasises that word. There we go. My sentence has been edited and improved.