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Year 2
Editing instructions for how to make a monster pizza
I can edit and improve my instructions for making a monster pizza.
New
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Year 2
Editing instructions for how to make a monster pizza
I can edit and improve my instructions for making a monster pizza.
Lesson details
Key learning points
- Editing is the process of making any changes needed to improve our writing.
- Punctuation is the name for the marks used to make our sentences clearer and easier to read.
- When we edit word choices, we carefully review and make changes to the words in our writing.
Common misconception
Pupils may think that they have no errors if they have checked for mistakes in the writing lesson.
Teach them that editing is a part of the writing process that needs time dedicated to improving the word choices and spotting mistakes.
Keywords
Editing - the process of making any changes needed to improve our writing
Punctuation - the name for the marks used to make our sentences clearer and easier to read
Children could do peer editing, where they edit their partner's work together and then swap roles. It can sometimes be easier for pupils to spot errors in someone else's work.
Teacher tip
Licence
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Starter quiz
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6 Questions
Q1.
What is a recipe?
instructions for building a house
instructions for making something to read
Q2.
Order these parts of a recipe, starting with which comes first.
Q3.
True or false? A set of instructions do not need to be followed in order.
Q4.
Which of these helps instructions to be read in the correct order?
imperative verbs
adjectives and nouns
Q5.
Which of these ordering fronted adverbials would tell the reader they were reading the last instruction?
First,
After,
Q6.
True or false? Ordering fronted adverbials are always followed by a comma.
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6 Questions
Q1.
True or false? Editing is the process of making any changes needed to improve our writing.
Q2.
True or false? When you edit, you decide what you will change and what you will keep the same.
Q3.
Punctuation is ...
the name for the people who read our writing
the name for the spaces between words in our writing
Q4.
Which of these is not an example of punctuation?
commas
full stops
Q5.
Which piece of punctuation comes at the end of a sentence?
comma
capital letter
Q6.
Which piece of punctuation comes after an ordering fronted adverbial?
full stop
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