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Planning to write the opening of the animated story 'Otherwise'

I can plan the opening of ‘Otherwise’.

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Year 2

Planning to write the opening of the animated story 'Otherwise'

I can plan the opening of ‘Otherwise’.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. The purpose of the opening is to introduce the main characters and the setting.
  2. Planning is an important part of preparing to write.
  3. Our plan will contain ambitious vocabulary.
  4. Our plan will contain nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs.

Keywords

  • Ambitious vocabulary - the use of precise and descriptive words in writing

  • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write

Common misconception

Pupils may write in full sentences in their plan.

Highlight that a plan is written in note form and model this explicitly to the children. Explain that you will turn your plan into full sentences when you write.

Encourage pupils to use the vocabulary generated in the previous lesson in their plan.
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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Fill in the blank: An expanded noun phrase may contain two adjectives and a ...
verb.
Correct answer: noun.
adverb.
Q2.
In an expanded noun phrase, you need to include a full stop between the adjectives.
True
Correct answer: False
Q3.
A character is a person or animal in a story.
Correct answer: True
False
Q4.
What colour is Anders?
green
Correct answer: red
grey
Q5.
Which two adjectives could be used to describe the skin of a chameleon?
fluffy
Correct answer: rough
Correct answer: scaly
furry
Q6.
Which two adjectives could be used to describe Anders' personality?
Correct answer: friendly
mean
lazy
Correct answer: curious

6 Questions

Q1.
Order these parts of a story staircase.
1 - opening
2 - build up
3 - climax
4 - resolution
Q2.
Which two of these does the opening introduce to the reader?
the problem in the story
Correct answer: the characters
Correct answer: the setting
Q3.
What is the setting of the animation 'Otherwise'?
a city
Correct answer: a jungle
a beach
Q4.
Using ambitious vocabulary means using words that are precise and descriptive.
Correct answer: True
False
Q5.
Order these parts of the opening of 'Otherwise'.
1 - Anders cracks out of his egg.
2 - Anders tries to shake hands with the green chameleons.
3 - The green chameleons ignore him and walk away.
Q6.
Nouns are doing or being words.
True
Correct answer: False