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Writing a postcard from Paddington listing places and feelings

I can write a postcard from Paddington’s perspective, including a list of places and his feelings.

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Year 1

Writing a postcard from Paddington listing places and feelings

I can write a postcard from Paddington’s perspective, including a list of places and his feelings.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. A postcard is written to someone when you are away somewhere, in this case Paddington in London.
  2. Postcards are written in the first person, using 'I', 'me' or 'my'.
  3. Adding descriptive language about places and feelings can help the person reading it imagine the experience.
  4. A postcard needs to start with a greeting to who you are writing to, using 'Dear ...' or 'To ...'.
  5. A list of places you have seen can be included in a postcard, with a comma in between and 'and' before the final place.

Keywords

  • Perspective - point of view

  • Expanded noun phrase - two adjectives listed to describe a noun

  • Noun - a naming word for people, places and things

  • Fronted adverbial of time - a sentence starter that tells the reader when something happens

  • Comma - a punctuation mark used to separate nouns in a list or adjectives in an expanded noun phrase

Common misconception

Pupils may not be secure in listing nouns correctly.

The model includes an adjective before each listed noun (e.g. green park). If necessary, model with or without the adjective to simplify the skill and ensure pupils meet the outcome. Go back to previous lessons where adjectives have been generated.

Allow pupils to write on a lined postcard template to make the writing feel more purposeful and meaningful. You could print Aunt Lucy's address onto the postcard for them.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need a copy of the 2014 Harper Collins Children's Books edition of 'Paddington' by Michael Bond, illustrated by R. W. Alley for this lesson.

Licence

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Which of these words are nouns?
Correct answer: London Eye
saw
exciting
Correct answer: Paddington
Correct answer: taxi
Q2.
Which of these words are adjectives?
Correct answer: noisy
park
Correct answer: green
bridge
Q3.
Which of these are expanded noun phrases?
Correct answer: huge, red bus
red bus
speedy taxi
Correct answer: speedy, black taxi
Q4.
Match each word class to its example in the following sentence: 'I saw a green park.'
Correct Answer:verb,saw

saw

Correct Answer:adjective,green

green

Correct Answer:noun,park

park

Q5.
Put the main events and feelings of Paddington in the story in the correct order.
1 - Paddington felt curious in the train station.
2 - Paddington felt shocked when he slipped on the cake.
3 - Paddington felt relaxed when he was on the sofa in the house.
Q6.
Which of these sentences is correctly punctuated?
I saw a park a shop and a bridge.
Correct answer: I saw a park, a shop and a bridge.
I saw a park, a shop, and, a bridge.
I saw a park, a shop and a bridge

6 Questions

Q1.
Which words could you use to start a postcard?
Correct answer: Dear ...
Correct answer: To ...
From ...
Goodbye ...
Q2.
Which of these are features of a postcard?
Correct answer: address
caption
Correct answer: space for a stamp
heading
Correct answer: a front with a photo or drawing
Q3.
Which words should you use if you are writing in the first person perspective?
Correct answer: I
they
Correct answer: me
Correct answer: my
are
Q4.
Which of these nouns are listed correctly using the correct punctuation?
Correct answer: I saw a park, a tower and the River Thames.
I saw a park, a tower, and, the River Thames.
I saw a park, a tower, and, the ,River Thames.
I saw, a park, a tower and the River Thames.
Q5.
Which of these are fronted adverbials of time?
Correct answer: First,
happily
Correct answer: Now,
Correct answer: Then,
angrily
Q6.
Match each key term to its example.
Correct Answer:expanded noun phrase,screeching, rattling taxi

screeching, rattling taxi

Correct Answer:nouns in a list,Big Ben, the London Eye and the River Thames

Big Ben, the London Eye and the River Thames

Correct Answer:adverbial of time,First,

First,