Planning the build up of 'A Christmas Carol'
I can generate precise vocabulary to plan two paragraphs for the build-up of 'A Christmas Carol'.
Planning the build up of 'A Christmas Carol'
I can generate precise vocabulary to plan two paragraphs for the build-up of 'A Christmas Carol'.
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Key learning points
- The build-up of ‘A Christmas Carol’ creates an eerie atmosphere leading up to the Ghost of Marley appearing.
- A key feature of the build-up is the building of suspense for the reader.
- The build-up will be written over two paragraphs where the suspense gradually increases.
- The use of precise vocabulary describing a range of sensory details helps to convey an eerie atmosphere.
- The use of ‘show and tell’ to describe Scrooge’s experiences conveys his emotions and supports in building suspense.
Keywords
Build-up - the building of action and suspense that leads up to the climax in a narrative
Suspense - a state of feeling excited or anxious uncertainty about what may happen
Sensory details - descriptions that include touch, sight, taste, sound and smell
'show and tell' - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions and expressions
Common misconception
Children may struggle to develop their own ideas for 'show and tell' to convey Scrooge's emotions.
Ask the children to recall a time when they have felt the emotions Scrooge does (e.g. nervousness or fear) and ask them what kind of physical sensations they experience during these moments. Examples to offer might be 'clammy hands' or 'tight chest'.
To help you plan your year 4 english lesson on: Planning the build up of 'A Christmas Carol', download all teaching resources for free and adapt to suit your pupils' needs...
To help you plan your year 4 english lesson on: Planning the build up of 'A Christmas Carol', download all teaching resources for free and adapt to suit your pupils' needs.
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musty scent of untouched, dusty rooms
flickering shadows cast by the candlelight
the taste of stale, bitter air
icy draft blew through the narrow hallways
soft creaking of ageing floorboards
Scrooge felt a tingling sensation throughout his body.
Scrooge shook uncontrollably, unable to speak a word.
Scrooge’s body relaxed and he exhaled deeply.