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Year 4

Planning the opening of 'A Christmas Carol'

I can generate precise vocabulary to plan a narrative opening.

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Year 4

Planning the opening of 'A Christmas Carol'

I can generate precise vocabulary to plan a narrative opening.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. The purpose of the opening is to set the scene and introduce the main characters.
  2. Ebenezer Scrooge is a miser who holds disdain for Christmas and this contrasts the general atmosphere in the setting.
  3. The use of precise and descriptive vocabulary ‘shows and tells’ the reader about Scrooge’s character.
  4. Direct speech is an effective way to convey a character’s thoughts and feelings.
  5. An effective plan captures key vocabulary and is organised concisely.

Keywords

  • Opening - the first section of a story where the writer describes the setting and main characters

  • Contrast - the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different

  • 'show and tell' - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions and expressions

  • Direct speech - the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text

  • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

Common misconception

Children may find it difficult to generate some of their own ideas for precise and ambitious vocabulary.

Model use of a thesaurus and brainstorm ideas as a class to up level simple pieces of vocabulary. For example, instead of 'walked', children might use 'trudged', 'dragged' or 'stomped'.

Create a character profile for Scrooge when discussing his character and brainstorm a variety of precise vocabulary to describe him. The children can use this to support them in their planning.
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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Where is 'A Christmas Carol' set?
Correct answer: London
Liverpool
Bristol
Q2.
What does atmosphere mean?
how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
a word or words that tell the reader where a noun is
Correct answer: the tone or mood created in a narrative
Q3.
What type of atmosphere is conveyed in the setting of London at Christmas?
one of misery
Correct answer: one of joy
one of fear
Q4.
What is the name of the main character in 'A Christmas Carol'?
the ghost of Christmas past
Charles Dickens
the ghost of Christmas future
Correct answer: Ebenezer Scrooge
Q5.
What is the name used to describe a main character in a narrative?
the hero
Correct answer: the protagonist
the villain
Q6.
True or false? If the main character is introduced at the beginning of a story, describing them is a key part of the opening.
Correct Answer: True, true

6 Questions

Q1.
What does an author do in the opening of a narrative?
Correct answer: provides a description of the setting
builds tension for the reader
Correct answer: introduces and describes the main characters
resolves the problem
Q2.
What does 'contrast' mean?
Correct answer: the differences between two or more things
the similarities between two or more things
the words chosen by the author
Q3.
Match the vocabulary to the correct definition.
Correct Answer:contrast,the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different

the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different

Correct Answer:miser,a person who hoards wealth and spends as little money as possible

a person who hoards wealth and spends as little money as possible

Correct Answer:disdain,the feeling that something is unworthy of consideration or respect

the feeling that something is unworthy of consideration or respect

Q4.
What is the name for when a group of words is used to describe a noun?
Correct answer: expanded noun phrase
fronted adverbial
personification
Q5.
True or false? I can only use one noun to refer to Scrooge.
Correct Answer: False, false
Q6.
How can I 'show and tell' the reader about Scrooge's character and feelings when describing his movements?
through the use of precise nouns
through the use of alliteration
Correct answer: through the use of precise verbs and adverbs