Writing the opening of 'A Christmas Carol'
I can write a narrative opening based on ‘A Christmas Carol’.
Writing the opening of 'A Christmas Carol'
I can write a narrative opening based on ‘A Christmas Carol’.
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Key learning points
- The introduction of Scrooge’s character greatly contrasts the general Christmas atmosphere in the opening.
- Precise vocabulary, including ‘show and tell’ and direct speech, conveys a character’s traits and feelings.
- Using a range of simple, compound and complex sentences supports text flow.
- A relative complex sentence uses a relative pronoun (who or which) to provide greater detail about a noun.
- Inverted commas are used to demarcate speech and a piece of punctuation separates speech from the reporting clause.
Keywords
Contrast - the comparison of two or more elements that are strikingly different
'show and tell' - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions and expressions
Direct speech - the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text
Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
Relative complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause
Common misconception
Children may assume that any mention of character speech is direct speech, because that has been the focus in the lesson.
Model how speech can still be indirectly reported within the opening alongside direct speech. E.g. 'Scrooge muttered insults at all those he passed.'
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Starter quiz
6 Questions
a sentence made of just one main clause with just one idea
a sentence formed of two main clauses and a joining word
a sentence formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause
Exit quiz
6 Questions
a sentence made of just one main clause with just one idea
a sentence formed of two main clauses and a joining word
a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
a sentence formed of a main clause and a relative subordinate clause