Planning and writing section two of an essay about early Islamic civilisation
I can use my research to plan and write the second section of an essay about early Islamic civilisation.
Planning and writing section two of an essay about early Islamic civilisation
I can use my research to plan and write the second section of an essay about early Islamic civilisation.
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Lesson details
Key learning points
- Writing is most successful when structure, content and vocabulary is planned.
- Information in this section should be specific and detailed.
- Cohesion, making use of research and a formal tone are appropriate in an essay.
- An essay can use a bank of research, evidence, statistics and quotes to inform the reader.
Keywords
Cohesive devices - linguistic structures that can enhance text flow
Adverbial complex sentence - a sentence that includes a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
Non-finite complex sentence - a sentence that includes a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause
Parenthesis - extra information that can be added or removed from a sentence and it still makes sense
Brackets - punctuation marks that can be used to add additional information to a sentence
Common misconception
Pupils may write the full section as one paragraph.
Parts of the plan are explicitly allocated into paragraphs one and two. This is also modelled in the second learning cycle.
Licence
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Lesson video
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Starter quiz
6 Questions
gives the reader general information about the essay subject
paragraphs of specific information about an aspect of the subject
summarises the key information of the essay
the family who reigned over the Islamic Empire during the Golden Age
a school, library and translation centre
the capital city constructed by the Abbasids
Exit quiz
6 Questions
linguistic structures that can enhance text flow
includes a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
includes a main clause and a non-finite subordinate clause
extra information that can be added or removed from a sentence
can be used to add additional information to a sentence
introduces what this paragraph will be about
gives the reader specific information to explain the point in detail
links on to the next section
difficult to penetrate
a welcoming place
symbolic of heavens and Earth
central to city