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Planning the opening of a diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'

I can plan the opening of a diary entry based on ‘How To Train Your Dragon’.

New
New
Year 5

Planning the opening of a diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'

I can plan the opening of a diary entry based on ‘How To Train Your Dragon’.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Diaries are informal in tone; this can be achieved through use of certain linguistic features, like contracted words.
  2. Diaries include references to the character’s thoughts and feelings.
  3. Diaries are written from the first person perspective.
  4. Writers can convey their feelings using 'tell' and 'show-not-tell' descriptions.

Keywords

  • Contraction - two words pushed together with an apostrophe

  • Show-not-tell - when the writer conveys feelings by describing physical sensations and actions

  • First person - the “I/we” perspective

Common misconception

Pupils may accidentally include too much detail of the recount in the opening.

Whilst some recount is important, reinforce to pupils that they must write from the personal viewpoint of the character, using feelings and thoughts to convey their character.

Ensure that pupils have opportunities to share and magpie ideas during the planning process; hearing other pupils' ideas helps all pupils learn and gather more ideas for vocabulary.
Teacher tip

Licence

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
What are included in diary entries?
Correct answer: a recount of experiences
Correct answer: thoughts and feelings
facts about the world
Q2.
Which of the following are key linguistic features in a diary entry?
Correct answer: first person
third person
Correct answer: past tense
Correct answer: contractions
Q3.
Order the following to show the layout of a diary entry.
1 - date
2 - greeting - 'Dear Diary,'
3 - paragraphs to organise recount
4 - sign-off
Q4.
Select the uncontracted form of 'don't':
does not
Correct answer: do not
did not
Q5.
What is a plan?
a final piece of written work
Correct answer: a framework that writers create before they write
a list of vocabulary
Q6.
True or false? This diary entry should be written in a formal tone.
Correct Answer: false, False, fals, fols

6 Questions

Q1.
What is first person perspective?
Correct answer: the point of view where the speaker or writer is the 'I/we' character
the first person who speaks in a story
the first person who appears in a story
Q2.
How should your notes for a diary be organised?
in full sentences
Correct answer: in bullet points in chronological order
in alphabetical order
Q3.
Match the keywords to their definitions:
Correct Answer:contraction,two words joined together using an apostrophe

two words joined together using an apostrophe

Correct Answer:show-not-tell,when the writer conveys feelings by describing physical sensations

when the writer conveys feelings by describing physical sensations

Correct Answer:informal tone,the sort of writing that you write to yourself or a friend

the sort of writing that you write to yourself or a friend

Q4.
Order the parts of our diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'.
1 - opening
2 - main body part 1 - describing dragon training
3 - main body part 2 - describing dragon training
4 - closing
Q5.
Select the examples of show-not-tell from the list:
I saw the villagers' panic in their eyes
Correct answer: my stomach churned
Correct answer: nausea swept over me
Q6.
Select appropriate adjectives to describe how Hiccup felt during dragon training:
Correct answer: panicked
excited
Correct answer: humiliated
Correct answer: nervous