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Writing the opening of a diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'

I can use a plan to write the opening of a diary entry based on ‘How To Train Your Dragon’.

New
New
Year 5

Writing the opening of a diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'

I can use a plan to write the opening of a diary entry based on ‘How To Train Your Dragon’.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. The opening of a diary can include a general recount of the day’s events.
  2. The opening includes references to the character’s thoughts and feelings.
  3. Informal tone can be achieved through use of contractions, vocabulary choice and exclamations.
  4. Plans and success criteria should be referred to during the writing process.

Keywords

  • Summarise - to sum up the information surrounding particular events, thoughts or feelings

  • General - the most basic, necessary information

Common misconception

Pupils may include facts and details that are too specific for the opening paragraph.

Learning cycle 1 and the success criteria explicitly reinforce the importance of keeping information in the opening general.

Record pupils' ideas on working walls in the classroom so that pupils can share and magpie ideas from each other.
Teacher tip

Licence

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Match the key terms to their definitions:
Correct Answer:first person perspective,the point of view where the speaker or writer is the 'I/we' character

the point of view where the speaker or writer is the 'I/we' character

Correct Answer:chronological order,when events are recounted in the order in which they happened

when events are recounted in the order in which they happened

Correct Answer:informal tone,conversational tone

conversational tone

Q2.
Select words appropriate to use when writing in the first person perspective:
Correct answer: I
they
Correct answer: me
he
Correct answer: us
Q3.
Match the contractions to their uncontracted forms:
Correct Answer:don't,do not

do not

Correct Answer:I've,I have

I have

Correct Answer:they're,they are

they are

Correct Answer:he's,he is

he is

Q4.
Select key features of a diary entry:
Correct answer: greeting (Dear Diary,)
Correct answer: informal tone
statistics
subject-specific vocabulary
Correct answer: thoughts and feelings
Q5.
The purpose of a diary entry is to do which of these?
tell a story
Correct answer: recount events
share information with others
Correct answer: record thoughts and feelings
Q6.
Select the examples of show-not-tell from the list:
Correct answer: my hands are still shaking
I felt humiliated
Correct answer: my heart sinks every time I think about going back again tomorrow

6 Questions

Q1.
Match the keywords to their definitions.
Correct Answer:summarise,to sum up the key information

to sum up the key information

Correct Answer:general,the most basic, necessary information

the most basic, necessary information

Correct Answer:first person perspective,the 'I/we' perspective

the 'I/we' perspective

Q2.
Information in the opening of a diary entry should be kept ...
Correct answer: general
specific
vague
Q3.
Key elements to include in the opening of a diary entry are which of these?
detailed recounts of parts of the day
Correct answer: brief summary of the events
Correct answer: sharing of over-arching thoughts and feelings
looking ahead to the future
Correct answer: a linking sentence which leads on to the next paragraph
Q4.
Order the parts of our diary entry based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'.
1 - opening
2 - main body part 1 - describing dragon training
3 - main body part 2 - describing dragon training
4 - closing
Q5.
Select the purpose of success criteria.
Correct answer: act as a guide for what to include
a list of the only writing skills that should be included
Correct answer: can be ticked off as the writer goes along
Q6.
Which linguistic features can be used to help create an informal tone in a diary entry?
subject-specific vocabulary
Correct answer: contractions
facts and statistics
Correct answer: exclamations
Correct answer: vocabulary choice