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Year 3

Planning the paragraph about exercise and sleep

I can plan the paragraph about exercise and sleep for a non-chronological report about healthy lifestyle.

New
New
Year 3

Planning the paragraph about exercise and sleep

I can plan the paragraph about exercise and sleep for a non-chronological report about healthy lifestyle.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to order notes.
  2. The purpose of the paragraph is to explain the importance of exercise and sleep in a healthy lifestyle.
  3. Fronted adverbials of cause and formal fronted adverbials are used at the start of sentences for cohesion.
  4. A subheading signals part of a a text and should stand out from the rest of the text.
  5. The plan should include subject-specific vocabulary.

Common misconception

Planning needs to be detailed and include full sentences.

Planning should only have keywords and be written in note-from using bullet points.

Keywords

  • Subject-specific vocabulary - vocabulary used when writing about a particular subject

  • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

  • Notes - written out of full sentences

Pupils can practise writing full sentences using their notes on mini-whiteboards ahead of writing this section.
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6 Questions

Q1.
Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
regular exercise keeps the heart working properly.
Regular exercise keeps the heart working properly
Correct answer: Regular exercise keeps the heart working properly.
Regular exercise Keeps The heart working properly.
Q2.
What is a fronted adverbial always followed by?
a full stop
Correct answer: a comma
an adjective
a co-ordinating conjunction
a capital letter
Q3.
Which of these fronted adverbials shows that another idea is being added to the previous sentence?
Interestingly,
However,
Correct answer: In addition,
As a result,
Q4.
Which of these words are subject-specific to the section about exercise and sleep?
Correct answer: muscles
healthy
Correct answer: physical activity
body
Q5.
Is this sentence true or false? 'Exercise can help improve our mental health.'
Correct Answer: true, True
Q6.
Is this sentence true or false? 'Full sentences are written in plans.'
Correct Answer: false, False

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of the following is true of exercise?
Regular exercise makes it harder to sleep
Regular exercise does not strengthen muscles
Correct answer: Regular exercise can improve sleep quality
Regular exercise is not recommended for children
Q2.
Exercise releases 'feed good' chemicals like ...
Correct answer: serotonin
sweat
Correct answer: endorphins
oxygen
Q3.
Match the words to their definitions.
Correct Answer:physical activity,any movement that uses up your body’s energy

any movement that uses up your body’s energy

Correct Answer:mental health,the state of your emotional wellbeing, which affects how you feel

the state of your emotional wellbeing, which affects how you feel

Correct Answer:exercise,a way of keeping the body healthy through being active

a way of keeping the body healthy through being active

Q4.
How much sleep do scientists recommend children to have a night?
9-12 minutes
Correct answer: 9-12 hours
7-9 hours
13-15 hours
Q5.
Is this statement true or false? 'Scientists recommend 30 minutes of physical activity a day for children.'
Correct Answer: false, False
Q6.
Which organ is especially important in keeping our bodies alive?
brain
Correct answer: heart
arms
stomach