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Year 5

Reading, responding and performing ‘My Heart is a Volcano’

I can read and respond to a poem, before performing it.

New
New
Year 5

Reading, responding and performing ‘My Heart is a Volcano’

I can read and respond to a poem, before performing it.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. ‘My Heart is a Volcano’ is split into three verses with four lines in each; each verse follows an ABCB rhyme scheme.
  2. Through the use of metaphors, the poem conveys the atmosphere as it follows the speaker's emotional journey.
  3. Understanding a poem, its language, imagery and the impression it creates will help create an impactful performance.
  4. Performances can be improved by considering the rhythm and flow of the poem, use of voice, gestures and body language.

Common misconception

Pupils may find it challenging to attribute a feeling or emotion to a metaphor.

Some pupils could have visuals of the imagery contained in the poem, to support when attributing the change in emotional state of the speaker from verse 1 to verse 3.

Keywords

  • Imagery - the use of language to create a mental picture or sensory experience for the reader or listener

  • Atmosphere - the mood created in a section or whole of a text

  • Pace - the speed or rhythm at which a poem is read or performed

  • Gesture - a movement that helps express an idea or meaning

  • Fixed verse - poetry with a specific structure, rhyme and meter

Pupils may benefit from having a copy of the poem to text-mark, to support when working the poem up for performance in Task B. It may be useful to encourage one or two gestures per verse.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You need a copy of the 2021 Otter Barry edition of ‘Stars with Flaming Tails’ written by Valerie Bloom, illustrated by Ken Wilson Max, for this lesson.

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
A theme is ...
a way of describing and comparing something by saying that it is something else
the use of language to create a mental picture or sensory experience
Correct answer: a big idea, topic or message that recurs within a text
Q2.
Match these types of poetic device to the correct examples.
Correct Answer:metaphor,Love is a rose, blossoming in the garden of the heart.

Love is a rose, blossoming in the garden of the heart.

Correct Answer:simile,Love is like a beacon, guiding us through the darkness.

Love is like a beacon, guiding us through the darkness.

Correct Answer:personification,Love whispers secrets to the wind, carrying its message across the sky

Love whispers secrets to the wind, carrying its message across the sky

Q3.
Imagery can appeal to the senses. Which of the following are senses?
Correct answer: touch
Correct answer: smell
memory
Correct answer: sight
emotions
Q4.
True or false? All the poems in a poetry collection have similar themes to one another.
Correct Answer: False, false
Q5.
Who is the illustrator of the poems in 'Stars with Flaming Tails'?
Valerie Bloom
Otter Barry
Correct answer: Ken Wilson Max
Q6.
What is a suitable definition for the subject of a poem?
energetic movement or events depicted within a poem
Correct answer: who or what the poem is about
the process of revising and refining a poem

6 Questions

Q1.
Match each keyword to the correct definition.
Correct Answer:imagery,the use of language to create a mental picture or sensory experience

the use of language to create a mental picture or sensory experience

Correct Answer:atmosphere,the mood created in a section or whole of a text

the mood created in a section or whole of a text

Correct Answer:fixed verse,poetry with a specific structure, rhyme and meter

poetry with a specific structure, rhyme and meter

Q2.
‘My Heart is a Volcano’ is a poem written by ...
Correct Answer: Valerie Bloom, valerie Bloom, valerie bloom, Valerie bloom
Q3.
How many verses are there in ‘My Heart is a Volcano’?
Correct answer: 3
4
5
Q4.
True or false? The speaker’s emotional state stays the same throughout the poem.
Correct Answer: False, false
Q5.
What does 'pace' mean in poetry?
Correct answer: the speed or rhythm at which a poem is read or performed
the mood created in a section or whole of a text
a movement that helps express an idea or meaning
Q6.
What is a gesture?
a facial expression
Correct answer: a movement that helps express an idea or meaning
a type of exercise