Writing a poem about the rain
I can write and revise my poem about the rain.
Writing a poem about the rain
I can write and revise my poem about the rain.
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Lesson details
Key learning points
- A pantoum is a form of poetry that originated in Malaysia.
- Pantoums are characterised by their repeating lines and overlapping structure.
- When editing pantoums, we can consider line length, use of rhyme and language choices.
- Editing word choices and phrases can help to improve the imagery and impression created by our poems.
- Reading your poem aloud will help you to revise and refine it.
Keywords
Pantoum - a form of poetry that uses repetition to create musical effect
Editing - the process of improving writing to improve text flow and overall quality
Common misconception
Pupils may find it challenging to generate rhyming words associated with rain.
Pupils could work in partners, or as a whole class, to create a list of rhyming words.
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