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      Planning the opening of 'The BFG' (part two)

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can plan the second part of an opening of a narrative based on ‘The BFG’.

      Key learning points

      1. The purpose of the opening is to engage the reader and introduce the setting and characters.
      2. Precise and ambitious vocabulary is logged on a plan for future use.
      3. Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to make notes clear.
      4. Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner indicate when, where and how action takes place.
      5. 'Show-not-tell' language shows a character’s feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions.

      Keywords

      • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

      • Notes - written out of full sentences

      • Ambitious vocabulary - high-level language in writing that meets the text purpose

      • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

      • 'show-not-tell' - showing a character’s feelings by describing their body language and facial expressions

      Common misconception

      Pupils may think they need to write full sentences on their plan.

      Plans are written to support pupils with future writing. Plans include ambitious vocabulary in note form.

      Teacher tip

      Re-watch part two of the opening of the film as many times as needed to support pupils with generating vocabulary. Encourage pupils to think about the senses: what can they see and what can they hear?

      Equipment

      You will need access to the 1989 film version of 'The BFG' for this lesson.

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Put the sections of a narrative in chronological order.

      1 - opening
      2 - build-up
      3 - climax
      4 - resolution

      Q2.
      Complete this sentence: 'The main characters in 'The BFG' are Sophie and .'

      Correct Answer: the BFG, The BFG, the big friendly giant, the Big Friendly Giant, The Big Friendly Giant

      Q3.
      What linguistic device is the following an example of? 'Seconds later,'

      subordinate clause
      Correct answer: fronted adverbial of time
      coordinating conjunction
      main clause

      Q4.
      What does a full sentence need to include?

      a comma
      Correct answer: a full stop (or other closing punctuation)
      Correct answer: a verb
      Correct answer: a capital letter
      a conjunction

      Q5.
      Match each word class to its example.

      Correct Answer:adjective,curious

      curious

      Correct Answer:noun,window

      window

      Correct Answer:adverb ,quietly

      quietly

      Correct Answer:verb,tiptoed

      tiptoed

      Q6.
      Which word is the verb in the following sentence? 'Cautiously, Sophie peered through the dusty window.'

      cautiously
      Sophie
      Correct answer: peered
      dusty
      the

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      What are the purposes of the opening of a narrative?

      to build up tension
      Correct answer: to engage the reader so that they carry on reading or watching
      to entertain the reader with characters' spoken words
      Correct answer: to introduce the setting and characters

      Q2.
      A fronted adverbial of __________ tells the reader where the action in the main clause takes place.

      time
      Correct answer: place
      manner

      Q3.
      Put the three key moments of part two of the opening in chronological order.

      1 - Sophie walked to the window and Mrs Clonkers shouted.
      2 - Sophie looked out of the window.
      3 - Sophie saw the mysterious figure.

      Q4.
      Choose an appropriate fronted adverbial to start the following sentence: '__________ Sophie edged towards the window.'

      Interestingly,
      As a result,
      In the night sky,
      Correct answer: Bravely,

      Q5.
      What is included in a plan?

      Correct answer: notes that can be written in bullet points
      full sentences
      Correct answer: ambitious vocabulary
      paragraphs
      subheadings

      Q6.
      Which word is the adverb in the following sentence? 'Sophie frantically opened the tattered curtains.'

      opened
      tattered
      Correct answer: frantically
      Sophie
      curtains

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