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Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive letter

I can write the second paragraph of a persuasive letter.

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Year 3

Writing the second paragraph of a persuasive letter

I can write the second paragraph of a persuasive letter.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Persuasive letters have distinctive linguistic features in order to achieve their purpose.
  2. An adverbial complex sentence is a main clause and an adverbial clause that starts with a subordinating conjunction.
  3. The subordinating conjunction ‘because’ introduces a reason.
  4. Oral rehearsal of full sentences helps to ensure they are structured accurately.
  5. First person perspective is the point of view where the writer is the 'I' character.

Keywords

  • First person - the ‘I/we’ perspective

  • Complex sentence - a sentence formed of at least one main clause and a subordinate clause

  • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

  • Sign-off - indicates who wrote the letter and that the letter is coming to an end

  • Persuasive techniques - language structures or devices used in writing to try to change someone’s mind or behaviour

Common misconception

Pupils may shift into writing from the third person perspective.

Pupils are going to be writing a persuasive letter written from the first person perspective of the red crayon in ‘The Day the Crayons Quit’. Ensure that pupils have a word bank or display with 'I', 'me', 'my', 'we', 'us' and 'our' prompts.

Give pupils the chance to practise using the notes from their plans to say full sentences aloud before writing them down.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You need a copy of the 2016 Harper Collins edition of ‘The Day the Crayons Quit', written by Drew Daywalt and illustrated by Oliver Jeffers for this lesson.

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
you have so many colours to choose from.
Correct answer: You have so many colours to choose from.
you have so many colours to choose from
you have so many colours to choose from
Q2.
Match the word class to its example.
Correct Answer:noun,pencil case

pencil case

Correct Answer:adjective,lonely

lonely

Correct Answer:adverb,regularly

regularly

Correct Answer:verb,understand

understand

Q3.
When writing our persuasive letter, we can use our to help us.
Correct Answer: plan, Plan
Q4.
Which sentence should end with a question mark?
Correct answer: Why are you always choosing me
How very frustrating
Stop choosing me
What a tiring day
Q5.
Which sentence is written in the first person?
It is going to leave today.
She is going to leave this classroom.
You are going to move.
Correct answer: I am going to leave this box.
Q6.
Select the verb in this sentence: 'Stop it right now!'
it
right
Correct answer: stop
now

6 Questions

Q1.
What is the purpose of a command in a persuasive letter?
to ask the recipient for a favour
to warn the recipient what could happen
Correct answer: to instruct the recipient to do something
to give the recipient general facts
Q2.
A complex sentence is formed of a main clause and a clause.
Correct Answer: subordinate, adverbial, adverbial subordinate, Subordinate
Q3.
Which of the following is an example of a sign-off?
Good morning, Duncan
Correct answer: Your frustrated friend, Red
How are you?
Dear owner,
Q4.
What is the purpose of a rhetorical question?
to have a chat with the reader
Correct answer: to engage directly with the reader
to make the reader laugh
Correct answer: to encourage the reader to reflect on a point
Q5.
Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
If, you choose me again I will have to leave.
If you choose me again I will have to leave.
If you, choose me again, I will have to leave.
Correct answer: If you choose me again, I will have to leave.
Q6.
Which of the following is an example of a warning?
I am looking for another owner.
Correct answer: If you don't change, I will find another owner.
I found another owner.
This is my new owner.