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Year 3

Writing the second diary entry based on 'The Firework Maker's Daughter'

I can write my second diary entry from the perspective of Lila.

New
New
Year 3

Writing the second diary entry based on 'The Firework Maker's Daughter'

I can write my second diary entry from the perspective of Lila.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. We use notes from our plan to form a range of sentence types.
  2. Diary entries shift between past and present tense to explain what has happened and convey current thoughts/feelings.
  3. Subordinating conjunctions are used to begin an adverbial clause.
  4. An adverbial clause is joined with a main clause to form an adverbial complex sentence.
  5. Rhetorical questions are an effective way to convey thoughts and emotions in a diary entry.

Common misconception

Children may include elements of Chulak's interaction with Lalchand in their recount because they know this as the reader but Lila only knows what Chulak tells her.

The diary is written from Lila's perspective. From her perspective, Chulak said he would visit her father and she doesn't find out anything about the interaction until he returns.

Keywords

  • Subordinating conjunction - a word that starts an adverbial clause

  • Adverbial complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause

  • Rhetorical question - a question asked to the reader that does not expect an answer

Incorporate a teaching point on switching to future tense at the very end of the diary entry to show Lila's current thoughts being focused on completing her quest. E.g. 'I am going to become the finest firework-maker in the land!'
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need a copy of the 2018 Penguin Random House UK edition of ‘The Firework Maker's Daughter' by Philip Pullman for this lesson.

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
Order these events for Lila's second diary entry.
1 - Chulak saw how upset Lila was and wanted to help her.
2 - Chulak said he would visit Lila's father to discover the secret.
3 - Chulak told Lila that he had been successful and shared the secret with her.
Q2.
Which of the following thoughts would Lila be likely to write when she finds out her father told Chulak the secret?
I was so happy to have found out the secret!
Correct answer: How could my father do this to me?
Correct answer: I feel utterly betrayed.
My father is such a funny man!
Q3.
Order these events for Lila's second diary entry.
1 - Lila decided to leave on her quest to the Volcano of Merapi.
2 - Lila wrote a letter telling her father of her plans.
3 - Lila prepared herself for the journey ahead.
Q4.
Which of the following thoughts would Lila be likely to write after she has decided to go on her quest?
Correct answer: I am determined to complete this quest!
I want to speak to my father about what he has done.
Correct answer: I am excited but somewhat nervous too.
I have no energy or enthusiasm.
Q5.
What tense would you use when writing about how you are currently feeling?
past tense
Correct answer: present tense
future tense
Q6.
True or false? You can copy out the notes from your plan exactly as they are.
Correct Answer: False, false

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of the following are subordinating conjunctions?
Correct answer: so
and
Correct answer: that
but
Correct answer: when
Q2.
Match the following subordinating conjunctions to their purpose.
Correct Answer:when,means 'at the time' something was happening

means 'at the time' something was happening

Correct Answer:so,used to show an effect

used to show an effect

Correct Answer:that,used to add detail to the main clause

used to add detail to the main clause

Q3.
Select the appropriate subordinating conjunction to complete the following sentence: '__________ Chulak returned, he told me what my father had said.
Correct answer: when
so
that
Q4.
Select the appropriate subordinating conjunction to complete the following sentence: 'I decided to go to Merapi __________ I could uncover the secret.'
when
Correct answer: so
that
Q5.
Select the appropriate subordinating conjunction to complete the following sentence: 'I wrote my father a letter __________ explained my decision to leave.'
when
so
Correct answer: that
Q6.
What is a rhetorical question?
a question that the writer wants the reader to answer
a question that the writer answers themselves
Correct answer: a question posed that is not intended to be answered