Writing part 2 of the climax of 'The Firework Maker's Daughter'
I can write a well-structured paragraph for part 2 of the climax.
Writing part 2 of the climax of 'The Firework Maker's Daughter'
I can write a well-structured paragraph for part 2 of the climax.
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Lesson details
Key learning points
- Direct speech between two characters in a narrative forms a dialogue.
- Inverted commas are used to demarcate speech and a piece of punctuation separates speech from the reporting clause.
- Precise and ambitious vocabulary shows and tells the reader what happened and how characters are feeling.
- Using a range of sentence types improves text flow for the reader.
- An adverbial complex sentence is a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause.
Keywords
Direct speech - the term used for a person speaking out loud in a text
Ambitious vocabulary - high-level language in writing that meets the text's purpose
Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged
Adverbial complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
Common misconception
Children may assume that any mention of character speech is direct speech, because that has been the focus of their learning.
Model how speech can still be indirectly reported within the climax alongside direct speech. E.g. 'Lila pleaded for Razvani to help her.'
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Equipment
You will need a copy of the 2018 Penguin Random House UK edition of ‘The Firework Maker's Daughter' by Philip Pullman for this lesson.
Content guidance
- Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
Lesson video
Starter quiz
6 Questions
Exit quiz
6 Questions
a sentence made of just one main clause with just one idea
a sentence formed of two main clauses and a joining word
a sentence formed of a main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
at the same time
adds detail
gives a reason