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Writing the climax of 'The Happy Prince'

I can write the climax of ‘The Happy Prince’.

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Year 4

Writing the climax of 'The Happy Prince'

I can write the climax of ‘The Happy Prince’.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Direct speech is punctuated using inverted commas. Dialogue moves the action forward.
  2. Notes from a plan are used to form full sentences.
  3. A range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
  4. A range of fronted adverbials is used to improve text flow.
  5. The purpose of the climax is to describe the main action and to take the tension and excitement to its highest point.

Keywords

  • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

  • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

  • Direct speech - shows that a character is speaking out loud in a text

  • Complex sentence - a sentence formed of a main clause and a subordinate clause

Common misconception

Pupils may struggle with remembering the different punctuation rules in speech first and speech second sentences.

Provide a visual scaffold of the speech first and speech second punctuation rules. Encourage pupils to use this when writing direct speech.

Ensure pupils have access to the notes from their plan to support them in writing the climax. You could spend time practising writing sentences on mini-whiteboards ahead of writing.
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6 Questions

Q1.
How do you use a plan to write part of a narrative?
copy it out word for word
Correct answer: use the notes to form a range of full sentences
Correct answer: follow the chronology
Q2.
Which of the following is a fronted adverbial of time?
Slowly,
Additionally,
Correct answer: One night,
Through the streets,
Q3.
Which piece of punctuation follows a fronted adverbial?
a full stop
an exclamation mark
Correct answer: a comma
inverted commas
Q4.
Order the four key moments of the climax chronologically.
1 - Winter arrived in the city.
2 - Bird became frailer and weaker, but he would not leave the prince’s side.
3 - Bird took his final breath at the prince’s feet.
4 - The prince was so devastated that his metal heart broke into two pieces.
Q5.
Fill in the missing word in the following sentence: 'Figurative language is the use of metaphor, simile and personification to paint vivid pictures for the .'
Correct Answer: reader, Reader
Q6.
What is an adverbial complex sentence?
a sentence formed of two main clauses
Correct answer: a sentence formed of one main clause and an adverbial subordinate clause
a sentence formed of two main clauses and a co-ordinating conjunction

6 Questions

Q1.
True or false? We should use a range of sentences in our writing.
Correct Answer: true, True
Q2.
Match the sentence type to its definition.
Correct Answer:simple,Blankets of snow draped across the streets.

Blankets of snow draped across the streets.

Correct Answer:compound,Bird became frailer, but he did not leave the prince’s side.

Bird became frailer, but he did not leave the prince’s side.

Correct Answer:adverbial complex,The prince’s heart shattered as the bird took its final breath.

The prince’s heart shattered as the bird took its final breath.

Q3.
What does an adverbial complex sentence consist of?
one main clause
two main clauses
Correct answer: a main clause and an adverbial clause
Q4.
What is the name of the punctuation mark that indicates where the words the character said begin and end?
comma
Correct answer: inverted commas
question mark
exclamation mark
full stop
Q5.
Which direct speech sentence is correctly punctuated?
The prince asked, ''how will I live without you?''
The prince asked, How will I live without you?
Correct answer: The prince asked, ''How will I live without you?''
The prince asked ''How will I live without you?
Q6.
Which sentence includes an example of figurative language?
It was a cold day.
Correct answer: The days were as cold as ice.
It was cold outside.
The days were getting colder and longer.

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