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Writing the opening of a narrative based on 'The Man on the Moon'

I can write a narrative opening based on 'The Man on the Moon’.

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Writing the opening of a narrative based on 'The Man on the Moon'

I can write a narrative opening based on 'The Man on the Moon’.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. The purpose of a narrative opening is to introduce the characters and to describe the setting to the reader.
  2. Saying sentences aloud before they are written helps to check for sense.
  3. Using the full range of sentence types (simple, compound and complex) improves text flow for the reader.
  4. A rhetorical question engages the reader and makes them feel more curious about the narrative.
  5. Show and tell language uses characters' movements, body language and facial expressions to describe feelings.

Keywords

  • Text flow - how a text is written to keep the reader engaged

  • Fronted adverbial - a sentence starter followed by a comma

  • Past tense - shows that the action happened before now

  • Show and tell - a writing technique for showing a character’s feelings with description of their actions, body language and facial expressions

  • Rhetorical question - a question asked to the reader that does not expect an answer

Common misconception

Pupils might write about moments that take place in the build-up, climax or resolution.

The opening follows a clear, chronological order that includes the three key moments from pupils' plans.

Pupils should be given lots of opportunities to say sentences aloud or to write sentences on whiteboards, using the notes from their plan ahead of writing.
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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Put the key moments of the opening in the correct order.
1 - Lily was bored at home.
2 - Lily looked through the telescope.
3 - Lily saw a man on the moon.
Q2.
Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
The young girl sighed in boredom
the young girl sighed in boredom
Correct answer: The young girl sighed in boredom.
the young girl sighed in boredom.
Q3.
Which of these nouns must start with a capital letter?
moon
Correct answer: lily
man
telescope
Q4.
Which of these sentences is punctuated correctly?
One wintry evening a young girl was slumped on the sofa.
One, wintry evening a young girl was slumped on the sofa.
Correct answer: One wintry evening, a young girl was slumped on the sofa.
One wintry evening a young girl, was slumped on the sofa.
Q5.
Match the word class to its example.
Correct Answer:noun,living room

living room

Correct Answer:adverb,curiously

curiously

Correct Answer:adjective,restless

restless

Correct Answer:verb,gazed

gazed

Q6.
Before writing sentences down, it is helpful to them aloud first.
Correct Answer: say, practise

6 Questions

Q1.
The purpose of the opening is to:
build up excitement and tension
Correct answer: introduce the characters and setting
solve a problem
Correct answer: engage the reader
Q2.
When we write, we:
Correct answer: showcase the sentence types we know
include only one type of sentence
do not check back for spelling and punctuation errors
Correct answer: say our sentences aloud first
Q3.
'Whatever could it be?' is an example of ...
a command.
Correct answer: a rhetorical question.
an exclamation.
a simple sentence.
Q4.
'Her jaw dropped.' is an example of ...
a compound sentence.
Correct answer: show and tell language.
alliteration.
a fronted adverbial.
Q5.
Match the sentence types to their examples.
Correct Answer:simple sentence,The young girl sighed in boredom.

The young girl sighed in boredom.

Correct Answer:compound sentence,Lily slumped on the sofa and she sighed in boredom.

Lily slumped on the sofa and she sighed in boredom.

Correct Answer:complex sentence,As she slumped on the sofa, Lily sighed in boredom.

As she slumped on the sofa, Lily sighed in boredom.

Q6.
Complete the following complex sentence with an appropriate subordinate clause: 'Lily's eyes widened __________.'
because she was sad
Correct answer: as she saw a solitary figure on the moon
until she went upstairs
and she stared in shock