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      Writing the opening of a journalistic report about the Titanic

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can write the opening of a journalistic report about the Titanic.

      Key learning points

      1. The opening provides the reader with general information about the event.
      2. The opening includes when, where and what took place and what is currently happening.
      3. Writers use a range of cohesive devices to maintain the reader's interest and achieve text purpose.
      4. The purpose of the opening is to engage the reader and encourage them to read on.

      Keywords

      • Opening - the first paragraph of a journalistic report

      • General information - the most basic, necessary information

      • Purpose - the aim of the text

      • Text cohesion - how a text flows to maintain the interest of the reader and achieve the text’s purpose

      • Parenthesis - additional information that is added to a sentence; if it is removed, the sentence still makes sense

      Common misconception

      Pupils may want to include facts that are too specific for the opening.

      Make explicit and repeated reference to only including general information. Use the 5 Ws (who, what, where, when, why) to help embed this.

      Teacher tip

      Express that pupils can convey information in different orders; for example, one pupil may explain when, where and then what happened whilst another may start with what, when and then where it happened.

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Match the linguistic features to their examples:

      Correct Answer:subject-specific vocabulary,quayside

      quayside

      Correct Answer:journalistic language,It is believed that

      It is believed that

      Correct Answer:fronted adverbial,Furthermore,

      Furthermore,

      Q2.
      Which of these is not a purpose of the opening of a journalistic report?

      engage the reader
      give the reader general information
      encourage the reader to read on
      Correct answer: give the reader specific facts in chronological order

      Q3.
      Which information should be included in the opening of a journalistic report?

      Correct answer: what
      Correct answer: when
      Correct answer: who
      Correct answer: where
      Correct answer: what is currently happening

      Q4.
      Which of the following should plans not include?

      clear, concise notes
      bullet points
      Correct answer: full sentences
      subject-specific language

      Q5.
      Match the subject-specific words to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:quay,a stone or metal platform alongside water for loading ships

      a stone or metal platform alongside water for loading ships

      Correct Answer:passengers,people travelling on the ship

      people travelling on the ship

      Correct Answer:crew,people working on the ship

      people working on the ship

      Correct Answer:maiden voyage,the ship's first journey

      the ship's first journey

      Q6.
      Which of these journalistic phrases explains the time most exactly?

      At approximately 12 noon,
      Correct answer: At precisely 12 noon,
      At vaguely 12 noon,

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Order the parts of a journalistic report.

      1 - opening
      2 - recount section
      3 - quotes section
      4 - closing

      Q2.
      Which of these enhance text cohesion?

      Correct answer: subject-specific vocabulary
      Correct answer: journalistic language
      Correct answer: fronted adverbials
      capital letters at the start of sentences
      Correct answer: parenthesis marked using brackets

      Q3.
      Tick the definition of parenthesis.

      a word that describes a noun
      a 'doing' word
      Correct answer: extra information in a sentence that can be removed

      Q4.
      Match the key words to their definitions:

      Correct Answer:opening,the first paragraph of a journalistic report

      the first paragraph of a journalistic report

      Correct Answer:general information,the most basic, necessary information

      the most basic, necessary information

      Correct Answer:purpose,the aim of the text

      the aim of the text

      Correct Answer:text cohesion,how a text flows to maintain the interest of the reader

      how a text flows to maintain the interest of the reader

      Q5.
      Identify the parenthesis in this sentence: The Titanic (built in Belfast) set sail from Southampton earlier today.

      The Titanic
      Correct answer: built in Belfast
      set sail from Southampton
      earlier today

      Q6.
      Which of these punctuation marks are brackets?

      ?
      .
      ,
      Correct answer: ( )

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