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Planning a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'

I can plan a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'.

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Planning a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'

I can plan a narrative scene with direct speech in 'Whale Rider'.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Ambitious vocabulary can be logged on a plan for future use.
  2. Fronted adverbials of time, place and manner indicate when, where and how action takes place.
  3. Dialogue, using direct speech, moves the plot forward and develops characters in a story.
  4. Show-not-tell language shows a character’s feelings by describing their actions, body language and facial expressions.
  5. Notes should not be written in full sentences and bullet points can be used to make notes clear.

Keywords

  • Direct speech - the term used for a character speaking out loud in a text

  • Plan - a framework that writers create before they write a section or whole text

  • Ambitious vocabulary - high-level language in writing that meets the text purpose

Common misconception

Direct speech should mimic real-life conversation exactly.

Direct speech should serve specific purposes, such as advancing the plot, developing characters or providing necessary information.

This narrative scene is based on the part of the film where the men and boys gather at the Marae. Paikea tries to sit on the front bench with them, which infuriates her grandfather, causing him to order her to leave. Capture stills from this scene for the 4 key moments that writing will be based on.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You must have access to the film 'Whale Rider' (South Pacific Pictures, 2002) to complete this unit. Images of the characters and scenes from the film will be helpful.

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This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is a plan?
a final piece of written work
Correct answer: a framework that writers create before they write
a writer's first ideas said aloud about their writing
Q2.
Put the sections of a narrative in chronological order.
1 - opening
2 - build-up
3 - climax
4 - resolution
Q3.
What linguistic device is 'Courageously,' an example of?
a subordinate clause
Correct answer: a fronted adverbial of manner
a co-ordinating conjunction
a main clause
Q4.
What does a full sentence need to include?
a comma
Correct answer: a full stop (or other closing punctuation)
Correct answer: a verb
Correct answer: a capital letter
a conjunction
Q5.
Match the word class to its example.
Correct Answer:verb,gripped

gripped

Correct Answer:noun,granddaughter

granddaughter

Correct Answer:adverb,proudly

proudly

Correct Answer:adjective,magical

magical

Q6.
Which of these is a full sentence?
The dutiful granddaughter.
With pride, the dutiful granddaughter.
Correct answer: With pride, the dutiful granddaughter sang melodically.
The dutiful granddaughter in the crowd.

6 Questions

Q1.
Put the four key moments of the build-up in chronological order.
1 - Paikea leads the boys to the Marae by singing.
2 - Paikea sits in the front row with the men.
3 - Koro tells her to move to the back because she is a girl.
4 - Paikea obeys her grandfather.
Q2.
Choose the appropriate fronted adverbial to start the following sentence: '__________ she slumped in defeat.'
In addition,
Correct answer: Solemnly,
However,
In the morning,
Quickly,
Q3.
What is the punctuation mark that shows when direct speech begins and ends?
exclamation mark
comma
Correct answer: inverted commas
full stop
Q4.
What is the reporting clause in this speech sentence? “What did I say?” asked Koro angrily.
''What did I say?''
Correct answer: asked Koro angrily
angrily
Koro
Q5.
Which of these is the adverb in the following sentence? 'Sternly, Koro fixed his gaze on his dutiful granddaughter.'
fixed
gaze
Correct answer: sternly
dutiful
granddaughter
Q6.
Match each word class to its example.
Correct Answer:verb,rising

rising

Correct Answer:adverb,passionately

passionately

Correct Answer:adjective,angry

angry

Correct Answer:noun,determination

determination