Self-editing a journalistic report based on 'When The Sky Falls'
I can edit my own journalistic report based on ‘When the Sky Falls’, aiming to improve the punctuation, text cohesion and vocabulary.
Self-editing a journalistic report based on 'When The Sky Falls'
I can edit my own journalistic report based on ‘When the Sky Falls’, aiming to improve the punctuation, text cohesion and vocabulary.
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Lesson details
Key learning points
- Editing is a critical part of the writing process. A growth mindset helps us benefit most from editing.
- Writing is most successful when editing is used to rethink, rephrase and reconsider first ideas.
- Editing is most successful when it is chunked by punctuation, sentence structure, vocabulary and cohesive devices.
- We can connect ideas in a range of different ways, using different cohesive devices - there is rarely only one way.
- We use a less formal tone when quoting real people's speech; we use a formal tone elsewhere in our text.
Keywords
Growth mindset - a desire to keep developing any skill set
Text cohesion - how a text flows to maintain the interest of the reader and achieve text purpose
Cohesive devices - language structures that develop text cohesion
Formal tone - the effect created by using serious, factual language
Common misconception
Pupils may have all characters using the same language in direct speech.
Encourage pupils to think about the 'voice' of each character - how might they speak?
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Content guidance
- Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
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