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Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences

I can write comparative topic sentences about two texts which focus on the same event - World War One.

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Comparing texts about World War One using comparative topic sentences

I can write comparative topic sentences about two texts which focus on the same event - World War One.

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Key learning points

  1. Comparing one text to another can often help you evaluate it more clearly.
  2. You can compare what each writer chose to write about, and how they chose to write about it.
  3. The opening line of comparative paragraphs could start with a topic sentence which states the paragraph's main idea.
  4. The next sentences of a comparative paragraph could focus on the differences between the two texts you wish to compare.

Keywords

  • Evaluate - to consider something carefully and make a judgement about it

  • Form - in literature, the type of text a writer uses; short story, memoir, poem are all examples

  • First person - the narrator is a person in the story, using pronouns like 'I', 'we', 'me'

  • Third person - the narrator is not a person in the story, using pronouns like 'she', 'he', 'they'

  • Method - the tools a writer uses to create their work; structure, form and language are perhaps the most significant examples.

Common misconception

You can't compare different text types to each other. For example, a short story to a memoir.

By comparing different forms, we can often come to understand why a writer chose a particular text type more deeply - what this particular text type allowed them to do or convey to the reader.


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Equipment

Pupils who wish to compare Ian Beck's 'Propping Up The Line' to another text need a copy of the 2014 edition of 'Stories of WW1' edited by Tony Bradman. Other texts are found in additional materials.

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Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
  • Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
When analysing a piece of war literature, we might consider the writer's choice of form, language and structure. Match these key terms to their definitions.
Correct Answer:form,the type of text a writer uses
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the type of text a writer uses

Correct Answer:language,the words a writer has chosen
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the words a writer has chosen

Correct Answer:structure,how a text is put together e.g. its beginning, middle and end
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how a text is put together e.g. its beginning, middle and end

Q2.
In the unit 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we read a number of different text types. Match each text type to its definition.
Correct Answer:short story,designed to be read in one sitting, written in prose
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designed to be read in one sitting, written in prose

Correct Answer:poem,designed to be read in one sitting, written in stanzas
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designed to be read in one sitting, written in stanzas

Correct Answer:memoir,an account based on someone's memories
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an account based on someone's memories

Correct Answer:letter,a written message (often) from one person to another
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a written message (often) from one person to another

Correct Answer:extract,selected moment from a text
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selected moment from a text

Q3.
In 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we have come across a number of different writers. Match each writer to a text they have written.
Correct Answer:Wilfred Owen ,'Mental Cases'
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'Mental Cases'

Correct Answer:Katherine Mansfield ,'The Fly'
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'The Fly'

Correct Answer:Vera Brittain ,'Testament of Youth'
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'Testament of Youth'

Correct Answer:Ian Beck ,'Propping Up The Line'
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'Propping Up The Line'

Q4.
In 'Literary perspectives from the First World War', we have come across a number of different writers. Match each writer to something we know about them.
Correct Answer:Wilfred Owen ,best remembered for poetry about realities of trench warfare
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best remembered for poetry about realities of trench warfare

Correct Answer:Katherine Mansfield,the master of the short story, experimental in plot and characters
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the master of the short story, experimental in plot and characters

Correct Answer:Vera Brittain ,lost a fiancé, two close friends and her brother in WW1
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lost a fiancé, two close friends and her brother in WW1

Correct Answer:Ian Beck,inspired by the experiences of their grandfather
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inspired by the experiences of their grandfather

Q5.
Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Owen and Beck present the brutal reality of trench warfare."
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However
Correct answer: Both
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Q6.
Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Owen experienced the trenches first hand, Beck was inspired by his grandfather’s time in France."
Correct answer: Whilst
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Both
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But

6 Questions

Q1.
When writing an analytical paragraph which compares two texts, you should start with a which states the paragraph's main idea.
Correct Answer: topic sentence
Q2.
Starting with the first, put these sentence ideas in the order for a paragraph which compares two texts.
1 - create a topic sentence stating the paragraph's main idea
2 - develop your topic sentence by stating an idea about Text 1
3 - compare Text 2 to Text 1
Q3.
Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Beck and Mansfield create fictitious short stories to explore the long term impacts of war."
Whilst
However
Correct answer: Both
But
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Q4.
Which word best completes this sentence comparing 2 texts: " Beck presents trauma of a soldier, Mansfield considers the trauma of a father who has lost a son."
Correct answer: Whilst
However
Both
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Q5.
Starting with the first, put these sentences in order for a paragraph which starts by comparing two texts.
1 - Both Mansfield and Beck explore long term trauma from WW1.
2 - Beck focuses on the physical and psychological trauma of a soldier.
3 - On the other hand, Mansfield considers a father who has lost a son.
Q6.
Starting with the first, put these sentences in order for a paragraph which starts by comparing two texts.
1 - Owen and Beck share a desire to present the horror of the trenches.
2 - The structure of Owen's poems often controls the pace we experience this horror.
3 - By contrast, Beck creates short episodes in his short story to pace the horror.

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