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Refining poems: harmony and dissonance

I can refine a poem by paying close attention to its harmony and dissonance.

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Year 8

Refining poems: harmony and dissonance

I can refine a poem by paying close attention to its harmony and dissonance.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Poets pay close attention to how their poems sound, as well as what the words express.
  2. You might like a poem for its harmonious sound before you understand its meanings.
  3. Angelou created harmonious sounds in her poems, often relying on rhythm, rhyme, repetition and refrain.
  4. When writing your own poems, reading your work aloud lets you to hear what sounds harmonious, and edit dissonant sounds.

Keywords

  • Harmony - in music, a combination of sounds that sound nice

  • Rhythm - the beat, flow, or pattern of a piece of music or writing

  • Syllable - the number of beats in a word; for example, "rise" has one syllable, "history" has three syllables

  • Dissonance - in music, a combination of sounds that don't sound nice.

  • Rhyme - repetition of similar sounds in two or more words.

Common misconception

A poem with a good rhythm always rhymes.

Rhythm is about the flow, beat and sound of a poem. Rhyme can sometimes develop rhythm, but it is not necessary.

If your pupils have written their own poems, then they could question and refine their own work in the practice tasks of Learning Cycle 1 and Learning Cycle 2.
Teacher tip

Equipment

Pupils need access to a copy of 'Still I Rise' by Maya Angelou published by Penguin Random House in 1978.

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour
  • Depiction or discussion of sexual content

Supervision

Adult supervision required

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
Maya Angelou wrote a poem called 'Still I ' ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou').
Correct Answer: Rise
Q2.
Match each method to its definition ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou').
Correct Answer:rhythm,the beat, flow or pattern of a piece of music or writing

the beat, flow or pattern of a piece of music or writing

Correct Answer:rhyme,the repetition of similar sounds in two or more words

the repetition of similar sounds in two or more words

Correct Answer:syllable,the number of beats in a word

the number of beats in a word

Correct Answer:refrain,a repeated line, or set of lines, in a poem

a repeated line, or set of lines, in a poem

Q3.
What is the refrain in the Maya Angelou's poem 'Still I Rise'? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
its first stanza
its speaker
Correct answer: its title
its rhythm
its rhyme
Q4.
How many syllables does the word rhyme have? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
Correct answer: 1
2
3
4
5
Q5.
How many syllables does the word harmony have? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
1
2
Correct answer: 3
4
5
Q6.
What books did Maya Angelou have next to her when writing her poems? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
her own autobiographies
a biography of President Clinton
Correct answer: a Bible
a thesaurus
Correct answer: a dictionary

6 Questions

Q1.
How many syllables does the word dissonance have? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
1
2
Correct answer: 3
4
5
Q2.
Which of these words is a synonym for rhythm? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou').
refrain
tone
Correct answer: beat
repetition
rhyme
Q3.
Which of these words is the best antonym for dissonance? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou').
good
discord
Correct answer: harmony
syllable
musical
Q4.
Maya Angelou read her work out loud after writing in order to hear any " ". ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou').
Correct Answer: dissonance
Q5.
Which of these sentences uses the word harmony, or its forms, correctly? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
Correct answer: I was pleased with the song: it had a harmonious melody.
Everyone left because the song sounded disharmonious.
Correct answer: We had a harmonious meeting: everyone agreed with each other.
He asked if I wanted to go, and I said harmoniously.
My teacher said my essay was very harmony.
Q6.
Which of these sentences uses the word dissonant, or its forms, correctly? ('Single poet study: Maya Angelou')
He asked if I wanted an ice-cream and I said dissonantly not.
I couldn't barely hear the music because the volume was so dissonant.
Correct answer: I put my hands over my ears to block out the dissonant sounds.
Correct answer: The poem needed work: some lines were dissonant.
The song sounded great: undisonant and rhythmical.