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Year 9

Planning and writing a 'Small Island' essay

I can plan and write a developed, analytical response.

New
New
Year 9

Planning and writing a 'Small Island' essay

I can plan and write a developed, analytical response.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. You need to include an introduction and thesis statement about the writer's intention.
  2. Each paragraph begins with a topic sentence, also based on the writer's intention.
  3. Form is important - we need to consider stagecraft and the ways in which the novel was adapted.
  4. Comment on a range of methods, including characterisation and setting.
  5. Planning is an important part of the writing process.

Common misconception

Many students often think that planning isn't a useful step in the writing process and that it takes too long.

How might planning help to organise our thoughts into a coherent response? How can planning improve the efficiency of the writing process?

Keywords

  • Thesis - The overarching argument to an essay, supported by the entire text.

  • Characterisation - The process of creating and developing characters. This can be through dialogue and physical description.

  • Logical - In essays, this means your points will be well sequenced.

  • Stagecraft - Using theatrical techniques to write and produce plays. This includes things like setting and lighting.

  • Dramatic techniques - Refers to the specific techniques used in plays to create theatrical effects e.g direct address.

You may find that not all learning cycles are relevant to your pupils' needs. For example, they may have previously worked on thesis and topic sentence creation. You may also want to consider whether the practice task in LC3 could form its own lesson (it is writing an extended essay).
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need access to a copy of the play 'Small Island' written by Andrea Levy and adapted for the stage by Helen Edmundson

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour
  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is a thesis statement?
The first sentence of a paragraph. It states the paragraph’s main idea.
Correct answer: Overarching argument, supported by the whole text.
The final sentence of a paragraph. It concludes the paragraph’s main idea.
Q2.
At the end of 'Small Island' Queenie's baby becomes a symbol of...
Correct Answer: hope
Q3.
Which character from 'Small Island' is most hopeful about the promise the 'Mother Country' will hold?
Correct answer: Gilbert
Michael
Elwood
Q4.
What is the meaning of the word 'characterisation'?
Refers to the specific techniques used in plays to create theatrical effects.
The skill in using theatrical techniques to write and produce plays.
Correct answer: The process of creating and developing a fictional identity in a text.
Q5.
Match the characters from 'Small Island' to the quotes they say.
Correct Answer:Gilbert,"England is where the future lies"

"England is where the future lies"

Correct Answer:Celia,"In England I will have a big house with a bell on the front door"

"In England I will have a big house with a bell on the front door"

Correct Answer:Hortense,"I will be a teacher, greeted with manners and respect"

"I will be a teacher, greeted with manners and respect"

Q6.
Complete the following quotation from the the final scene of 'Small Island': "The lights fade down until there is only a on this baby"
Correct Answer: spotlight, spot light, spot-light

6 Questions

Q1.
What are the key words in the following question: How does Edmundson explore the theme of identity in ‘Small Island’?
Correct answer: How
Correct answer: Edmunson
explore
theme
Correct answer: identity
Q2.
Match each section of the planning grid to its purpose.
Correct Answer:thesis,Overarching argument, supported by the whole text.

Overarching argument, supported by the whole text.

Correct Answer:topic sentence,The first sentence of a paragraph; the paragraph's main idea.

The first sentence of a paragraph; the paragraph's main idea.

Correct Answer:supporting detail,References to the text which support your topic sentence.

References to the text which support your topic sentence.

Correct Answer:concluding sentence,The final sentence of a paragraph; concludes the paragraph’s ideas.

The final sentence of a paragraph; concludes the paragraph’s ideas.

Correct Answer:conclusion,Sums up your essay’s overall thesis.

Sums up your essay’s overall thesis.

Q3.
What does a successful topic sentence include?
Correct answer: a clear focus
Correct answer: links to the question
language analysis
Correct answer: links to the writer's intention
Q4.
What is not true of supporting details when planning your response?
Correct answer: they should be written in full sentences
you can include main and supporting quotations
you should identify methods
they should be in a logical sequence
Q5.
How many parts are there to an effective introduction?
2
Correct answer: 3
4
Q6.
is the skill in using theatrical techniques to write and produce plays. This includes things like setting and lighting.
Correct Answer: stagecraft, stage craft, stage-craft