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Year 9

Understanding questions and writing thesis statements on ‘Small Island’

I can understand the expectations of an essay question and write an effective thesis statement.

New
New
Year 9

Understanding questions and writing thesis statements on ‘Small Island’

I can understand the expectations of an essay question and write an effective thesis statement.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Annotating an essay question is a good way to understand the focus.
  2. A thesis is a clear overarching argument supported by the whole text.
  3. An effective thesis statement will focus on the big ideas and make reference to the whole text.
  4. Topic sentences start each paragraph and will focus on a specific character or moment in the text.

Common misconception

That planning is not something that needs to be practiced.

What are the benefits of practising planning over writing whole essay responses? Not only is planning a very important part of the writing process, but an efficient way to practise essay writing.

Keywords

  • Idealistic - viewing something as perfect even if the reality suggests something different

  • Thesis - the overarching argument to an essay supported by the entire text

  • Topic sentence - the first sentence of a paragraph; it states the paragraph’s main idea

  • Aspiration - a hope or ambition of achieving something

Task A has the potential to be a group task. Different groups could focus on different questions before sharing their ideas. Students could then pick which question they would like to focus on when they write their thesis statements.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need access to a copy of the play 'Small Island' written by Andrea Levy and adapted for the stage by Helen Edmundson

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
In 'Small Island', which character is scared they will be left behind?
Celia
Gilbert
Correct answer: Hortense
Elwood
Q2.
Which word beginning with 'A' describes the hope or ambition of achieving something.
Correct Answer: aspiration
Q3.
Which one of these sentences does not use a fronted adverbial to develop the comment?
For example, "I cannot be the fool who is left behind again."
More specifically, it reveals the connection between identity and ambition.
Correct answer: Hortense and Gilbert make a pragmatic decision to marry.
Additionally, Michael punishes Hortense for what she has done.
Q4.
Which one of these sentences does not use a comparative conjunction?
Similarly, Hortense also believes that Michael is coming to rescue her.
Correct answer: Gilbert expresses his concern over marrying Hortense, saying "it's a tough one".
However, Elwood appears much more cynical.
Whereas, Mrs Ryder sees the hurricane as an exottic experience.
Q5.
Starting with the first, put these events from Act 1 of 'Small Island' in chronological order.
1 - Hortense and Mrs Ryder react differently to the hurricane
2 - Michael leaves to join the RAF
3 - Gilbert joins the RAF, but it does not live up to expectations
4 - Hortense and Gilbert marry. Queenie and Michael have a relationship
5 - Gilbert leaves for England aboard HMT Empire Windrush. Queenie is pregnant
Q6.
Complete this quote from Act 1 Scene 7 in 'Small Island': "England is my ..."
Correct Answer: golden life.

6 Questions

Q1.
What are the key words in this essay question: How does Edmundson explore the themes of power and identity in Act 1 of 'Small Island'?
Correct answer: How
Does
Correct answer: Power
Correct answer: Identity
Act 1
Q2.
Match the key words from the essay question to what it is asking you to do.
Correct Answer:How ,Analyse Edmundson’s use of language and structure

Analyse Edmundson’s use of language and structure

Correct Answer:Edmundson,What are the writer’s intention?

What are the writer’s intention?

Correct Answer:Power and identity,What ideas are there around these concepts in Act 1?

What ideas are there around these concepts in Act 1?

Q3.
What is the purpose of a thesis statement in an essay?
To introduce the main characters
To provide supporting detail
Correct answer: To state the overarching argument supported by the entire text
To conclude the essay
Q4.
What is the function of a topic sentence in a paragraph?
To summarise the entire essay
Correct answer: To state the paragraph's main idea
To provide examples and evidence
To conclude the paragraph
Q5.
Which of these create a checklist for an excellent thesis statement?
Correct answer: Start of essay
Focusses on a character
Correct answer: Supported by whole text
Correct answer: Establishes overarching argument of essay
Offers a quote
Q6.
Match the features of an essay to its description.
Correct Answer:Thesis statement,Overarching argument, supported by the whole text.

Overarching argument, supported by the whole text.

Correct Answer:Topic sentence,It states the paragraph’s main idea.

It states the paragraph’s main idea.

Correct Answer:Supporting detail,References to the text which support your topic sentence.

References to the text which support your topic sentence.

Correct Answer:Main quotations,Quotations which support argument and require analysis.

Quotations which support argument and require analysis.

Correct Answer:Concluding sentence,The final sentence of a paragraph.

The final sentence of a paragraph.

Correct Answer:Conclusion,Sums up your essay’s overall thesis.

Sums up your essay’s overall thesis.