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Year 7

Using figurative language and structure to create an unsettling atmosphere

I can write an unsettling description using a wide range of language devices, as well as punctuation and sentence types chosen for effect.

New
New
Year 7

Using figurative language and structure to create an unsettling atmosphere

I can write an unsettling description using a wide range of language devices, as well as punctuation and sentence types chosen for effect.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. To plan an effective description, you should establish a clear setting using precise imagery.
  2. When describing show off your ability to use figurative language, varied sentences and punctuation for effect.
  3. Make sure that your description is well-structured and has a clear sense of direction – a beginning, middle and end.

Common misconception

That you should use generic sensory language to create an effective description.

You need to use sensory language tailored to the atmosphere that you want to create in order for it to be effective.

Keywords

  • Sensory language - language that uses the five senses to evoke a mental image in the reader.

  • Eerie - something strange and frightening.

  • Atmosphere - the feeling or sense evoked by an environment or setting.

  • Unsettling - something that causes worry or anxiety.

  • Reflection - giving serious thought or consideration to something.

You could ask the students to reflect on their work as homework if they need more time devoted to planning.
Teacher tip

Licence

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is atmosphere?
the emotion a writer wants a reader to feel
Correct answer: the feeling or sense evoked by an environment or setting
something that causes worry or anxiety
Q2.
What kind of language is being described here: 'language that uses the five senses to evoke a mental image in the reader.'
Correct Answer: sensory language, sensory
Q3.
What language device is being described here?: 'a direct comparison of two things using 'is' or 'was.
Correct Answer: metaphor, a metaphor
Q4.
What is 'pathetic fallacy'?
Correct answer: where human emotions are given to non-human objects or things
a comparison between two things using 'like' or 'as'
giving human characteristics to non-human things
Q5.
What is a complex sentence?
a sentence with one main clause
a sentence with two main clauses joined by a connective
Correct answer: a sentence with one main clause and one subordinate clause
Q6.
What does it mean to reflect on your work?
Correct answer: Looking at your work to see what you did well
Rewriting your work to enhance it
Proof-reading your work to check for errors

6 Questions

Q1.
What does the word 'eerie' mean?
Correct answer: something strange and frightening
something that causes worry or anxiety
something which is unfamiliar
Q2.
What device is being described here?: 'where you give human characteristics to nonhuman objects or things.'
Correct Answer: personification
Q3.
Which punctuation types might help create an eerie or unsettling atmosphere?
Correct answer: dashes
Correct answer: question marks
commas
full stops
Q4.
Which of the following would you use to create an unsettling atmosphere?
The leaves spun and danced.
Correct answer: The leaves whispered between themselves as I passed.
The leaves waved me on my way.
Q5.
Complete the sentence: 'make sure that your description is well with a beginning, middle and end.'
Correct Answer: structured
Q6.
Starting with the first, put the structure of a description into chronological order.
1 - zoom out and describe the image as a whole
2 - zoom in on details and describe them
3 - leave the reader with a final emotion