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Using adjectives and semantic fields to plan and write descriptive paragraphs

I can create a specific atmosphere by linking vocabulary choices and creating a semantic field.

New
New
Year 7

Using adjectives and semantic fields to plan and write descriptive paragraphs

I can create a specific atmosphere by linking vocabulary choices and creating a semantic field.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Descriptive writing is designed create a clear atmosphere for the reader and paint a picture of an image.
  2. Semantic fields can be used to create that picture for the reader.
  3. A semantic field is a group of words or expressions that are related in meaning.
  4. Choose your adjectives carefully in a descriptive paragraph in order to create a semantic field.

Common misconception

You should always use the most impressive sounding words in your description.

While you should reach for ambitious words, you want to ensure that all the words you use are creating a consistent atmosphere.

Keywords

  • Atmosphere - the feeling or sense evoked by the setting or environment.

  • Planning - the act of deciding how to do something.

  • Descriptive - describing something in an interesting and detailed way.

  • Semantic field - a group of words or expressions that are related in meaning.

  • Adjective - a word that describes or defines a noun.

You could ask the students to experiment with swapping different adjectives in and out and seeing how it affects the atmosphere.
Teacher tip

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6 Questions

Q1.
An adjective is .
a place, person or thing performing the action
a being, doing or having word
Correct answer: a word that describes or defines a noun
Q2.
Which of the following words is an adjective?
building
Correct answer: bewitching
stroll
Q3.
If you make a plan then you are .
Correct answer: deciding how to do something
writing your answer
editing and improving your answer
Q4.
A synonym is .
Correct answer: a word with a similar meaning
when you repeat the same word
a word with the opposite meaning
Q5.
Which two of the following are a synonym of 'calm'?
Correct answer: tranquil
Correct answer: serene
discordant
chaotic
Q6.
Descriptive writing is designed to .
shock the reader
make the reader feel sympathy for a character
Correct answer: create an atmosphere for the reader

6 Questions

Q1.
An atmosphere is .
Correct answer: the feeling evoked by the setting or environment
where objects are given human characteristics
where the meaning of the line continues over onto the next
Q2.
A semantic field is .
Correct answer: a group of words that are related in meaning
a group of words that are not related in meaning
a group of repeated words
Q3.
If you are aiming to create a calm atmosphere, which of the following two words could you use?
Correct answer: soothing
cacophonous
Correct answer: placid
tumultuous
Q4.
In your single paragraph outline, what would you put in the first box?
Correct answer: the focus of the paragraph
the concluding ideas for the paragraph
notes on the details for the paragraph
Q5.
Which of the following pair of adjectives create a consistent atmosphere?
tense, serene
Correct answer: tranquil, serene
chaotic, serene
Q6.
Which of the following phrases creates a consistent atmosphere with 'the twisting branches grasped for me'?
Correct answer: 'like gnarled fingers'
'with smooth hands'
'with dainty fingers'