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Using precise evidence from Burnett's 'The Secret Garden' to support an idea

I can precisely use quotations from an extract from Burnett’s ‘The Secret Garden’ as evidence to support a topic sentence.

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Year 7

Using precise evidence from Burnett's 'The Secret Garden' to support an idea

I can precisely use quotations from an extract from Burnett’s ‘The Secret Garden’ as evidence to support a topic sentence.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. An analytical question asks you to use evidence from the text to present your ideas.
  2. A topic sentence should concisely explain the main idea of the paragraph.
  3. Quotations should match the point made by the topic sentence.
  4. Quotations should be embedded in your sentences.

Common misconception

That you should put literary analysis in every part of your analytical writing.

You shouldn't put literary analysis in your topic sentence - it should just explain the main idea of the paragraph concisely.

Keywords

  • Topic sentence - a sentence that states the main idea of a paragraph

  • Embed - to put a quotation inside your own sentence

  • Evidence - something which shows that something else exists or is true

  • Present - to describe or show (someone or something) in a particular way

  • Quotation - a phrase or short piece of writing taken from a longer work of literature

You could ask the students to write up an analytical paragraph to answer the question for homework or in the next lesson.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need an extract from 'The Secret Garden' which is available in the additional materials.

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is a quotation?
an opinion about the text
Correct answer: a word or phrase taken from a text
a word or phrase that gives your opinion on the text
Q2.
marks are punctuation marks used in pairs in various writing systems to identify direct speech, a quotation, or a phrase.
Correct answer: Quotation
Question
Exclamation
Q3.
Something which shows that something else exists or is true is .
Correct answer: evidence
a theory
emotive
an assumption
Q4.
The tone of a text is .
the way the setting is described
Correct answer: the general mood or feeling
the sense of sadness
the sense of happiness
Q5.
If something is described as 'tangled' and 'matted', you would think it is .
well looked after
organised
Correct answer: chaotic
unhappy
Q6.
Superlative means .
Correct answer: the highest degree of a quality
something ordinary
the lowest degree of quality

6 Questions

Q1.
A topic sentence should include .
Correct answer: the writer's name
literary analysis
quotations
Q2.
Quotations in an analytical paragraph should .
be as long as possible
disprove the topic sentence
Correct answer: match the point of the topic sentence
Q3.
To 'embed' a quotation means .
to provide evidence
to match the quotation to the topic sentence
Correct answer: to put the quotation inside your sentence
Q4.
Which quotation best matches the topic sentence: 'Burnett presents the secret garden as wild and chaotic'?
'loveliest'
'standard roses'
Correct answer: 'climbing roses'
'grass of a wintry brown'
Q5.
What is wrong with this sentence: 'When Burnett says that the garden is 'the sweetest', it gives the reader the impression that the garden is uncared for.'
the quotation isn't embedded
Correct answer: the quotation doesn't match the point of the sentence
the sentence doesn't suggest that it is the writer's construction
Q6.
To describe or show (someone or something) in a particular way is called to .
Correct answer: present
embed
infer
assume

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