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Writing clear analytical paragraphs about Bilan's 'Asha and the Spirit Bird'

I can plan and write up a clear and cohesive paragraph to answer the question: ‘How does Bilan present the temple? in 'Asha and the Spirit Bird'.

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Writing clear analytical paragraphs about Bilan's 'Asha and the Spirit Bird'

I can plan and write up a clear and cohesive paragraph to answer the question: ‘How does Bilan present the temple? in 'Asha and the Spirit Bird'.

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Key learning points

  1. In analytical writing, use conjunctions and connectives (as/because/therefore) to clearly explain ideas.
  2. In analytical writing, use discourse markers like 'Additionally’ and 'In particular’ to develop your analysis.
  3. In analytical writing, use modal verbs to develop a tentative style – use 'could' or 'might' to explain inferences.
  4. Use single paragraph outlines to plan detailed, cohesive paragraphs.

Keywords

  • Analytical - to examine something closely so that you can understand it

  • Cohesive - how a text is connected together to link it all and give it meaning

  • Present - to give, show, provide, or make known

  • Tentative - said or done in a careful but uncertain way because you do not know if you are right

  • Infer - to form an opinion or guess that something is true because of the information that you have

Common misconception

That you should use definitive, authoritative language in your analytical writing to prove to the reader that you are right.

You should use tentative language because we can never be truly sure of the writer's intentions - you should use evidence and clear explanations to prove your idea to the reader.

You could ask the students to plan and write a second paragraph for homework.
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Equipment

You will need a copy of the Chicken House Books edition of ‘Asha and the Spirit Bird’ by Jasbinder Bilan.

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
What does the word 'magnificent' mean?
something quite pleasant
Correct answer: something very impressive
something very disgusting
Q2.
What is a simile?
a comparison where something is said to be something else
Correct answer: a comparison where something is said to be like something else
where objects are given human characteristics
Q3.
When writing about a text, we use quotations as for our argument.
Correct Answer: evidence
Q4.
A semantic field is...
Correct answer: a group of words with a similar meaning
a group of words with a dissimilar meaning
repeating the same word throughout the text
Q5.
To form an opinion or guess that something is true because of the information that you have is known as making an...
Correct Answer: inference
Q6.
We generally associate light imagery with...
Correct answer: positivity
negativity
neutrality

6 Questions

Q1.
In 'Asha and the Spirit Bird', Bilan describes the temple as disappearing into the...
"ground"
Correct answer: "sky"
"river"
Q2.
Tentative means...
something concrete
Correct answer: something uncertain
something negative
Q3.
Bilan's semantic field of "magnificent", "iridescent" and "sparkling" suggests the temple is...
Correct answer: beautiful
frightening
expensive
Q4.
To examine something closely so that you can understand it means to...
Correct Answer: analyse
Q5.
To write in a cohesive way means to...
Correct answer: link ideas together
write in a positive manner
analyse a text
Q6.
Which of the following uses tentative language?
Bilan's use of colour imagery shows the temple as beautiful.
Correct answer: Bilan's use of colour imagery could show the temple as beautiful.
Bilan's use of colour imagery absolutely shows the temple as beautiful.