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'The Twisted Tree': writing an effective article about the draugr

I can annotate a model article and write my own about the killing of the draugr.

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'The Twisted Tree': writing an effective article about the draugr

I can annotate a model article and write my own about the killing of the draugr.

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Key learning points

  1. A newspaper article should be written in the third person.
  2. A newspaper article should have a formal tone without using slang.
  3. You can use language devices in a newspaper article to intrigue the reader.
  4. You need to punctuate quotes correctly using speech marks in a newspaper article.
  5. You can use a noun appositive in an article to give more information about a noun.

Keywords

  • Formal tone - a way of writing or speaking that is respectful, serious, and follows traditional rules of language

  • Third-person - a point of view in writing where the writer is removed and uses pronouns like 'he', 'she', 'it' or 'they'

  • Noun appositive - a phrase that explains or identifies a noun further e.g. 'My friend, a skilled musician, plays the piano'

Common misconception

Pupils might think that the use of a formal tone and third person point of view is only necessary for professional journalism and not applicable to other forms of writing.

Explain that while formal tone and third person are essential in professional journalism, they are also important in many other types of writing, including more localised articles like this.


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If time allows, have pupils exchange papers with a partner for peer review after Learning Cycle 2. Provide a checklist that includes elements like formal tone, third person usage and correct punctuation of quotes. This peer review process will help students identify areas for improvement.
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You will need access to the text 'The Twisted Tree' by Rachel Burge, published by Hot Key Books, 2019.

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Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
What point of view should a newspaper article be written in?
first-person
second-person
Correct answer: third-person
Q2.
Which of the following best describes a formal tone in writing?
using slang and casual language
Correct answer: respectful, serious and follows traditional rules of language
writing as if speaking to a friend
using abbreviations and emojis
Q3.
What is a noun appositive?
a verb that describes an action
Correct answer: a phrase that further explains or identifies a noun
a conjunction connecting two sentences
an adjective describing a noun
Q4.
Why do newspaper articles often use a variety of language devices?
to confuse the reader
to simplify the message of the article
Correct answer: to intrigue and engage the reader
to provide factual information
Q5.
In writing, what does third-person perspective refer to?
writing from the author's personal viewpoint
using pronouns like 'I' and 'me'
writing from the perspective of a character in the story
Correct answer: writing from a detached perspective, using pronouns like 'he', 'she' and 'they'
Q6.
'The Twisted Tree' is written by Rachel ...
Correct Answer: Burge

6 Questions

Q1.
Which part of a newspaper article introduces the who, what, where, when and why?
headline
subheading
Correct answer: opening
tail
Q2.
What is the purpose of a subheading in a newspaper article?
to provide a detailed explanation
to introduce a new section
Correct answer: to develop the headline further with more detail
to include background information
Q3.
What is an important quality of a subheading in a newspaper article?
it should be long and detailed
Correct answer: it should be concise and snappy
it should include quotes from sources
it should be written in first person
Q4.
In a newspaper article, why is it important to use third-person perspective?
it creates a personal connection with the reader
it builds excitement in the article
Correct answer: it maintains objectivity and credibility
it allows for emotional storytelling
Q5.
Identify the language device used in this sentence: "Until now, all of the sightings have been in the darkest depths of the night."
metaphor
Correct answer: alliteration
simile
personification
Q6.
Which sentence uses a noun appositive correctly?
Correct answer: Olav, a retired fisherman, was fearful of the draugr sightings.
Olav was fearful of the draugr sightings.
Olav retired fisherman was fearful of the draugr sightings.
Olav, retired fisherman was fearful of the draugr sightings.

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