New
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Year 10
AQA

Descriptive writing: crafting sentence structures to create specific effects

I can use a range of sentence structures to create specific effects when writing descriptively.

New
New
Year 10
AQA

Descriptive writing: crafting sentence structures to create specific effects

I can use a range of sentence structures to create specific effects when writing descriptively.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Establish a clear setting using precise sensory imagery
  2. Good writers use a range of sentence structures and types – avoid over-using just one sentence structure
  3. Good writers vary their sentence openings – avoid repetition of ‘the’
  4. Conjunctions have specific uses – they clarify the relationship between independent clauses and are not interchangeable
  5. In your writing, show off your ability to use varied sentence structures for effect

Common misconception

All conjunctions are the same and interchangeable.

Coordinating conjunctions (but, and, so) link clauses of equal importance. Subordinate conjunctions link dependent and independent clauses.

Keywords

  • Simple sentence - A sentence containing only a single clause with a subject and verb.

  • Compound sentence - A sentence containing two independent clauses linked by a conjunction.

  • Complex sentence - A sentence with a combination of a main clause and a subordinate clause.

  • Subordinate clause - A clause in a sentence that cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. It complements a main clause.

  • Conjunction - A word used to connect clauses or sentences.

This lesson focuses on effective descriptive paragraphs on volcanoes. You may wish to support the students' initial ideation with videos/resources linked to this.
Teacher tip

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

Supervision

Adult supervision required

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
The story 'Journey to the Centre of the Earth' is an example of what genre?
horror
romance
Correct answer: science fiction
Gothic
crime
Q2.
Who wrote 'Journey to the Centre of the Earth'?
Correct Answer: Jules Verne, Verne, Jules verne, jules verne, jules Verne
Q3.
An exclamative is a sentence which ...
asks a question.
Correct answer: conveys strong emotion.
conveys a fact or piece of information.
gives a direct command.
Q4.
Match the example sentence with the sentence type.
Correct Answer:How did we get here?,Interrogative

Interrogative

Correct Answer:Take cover now.,Imperative

Imperative

Correct Answer:It's behind you!,Exclamative

Exclamative

Correct Answer:The lamps were broken.,Declarative

Declarative

Q5.
Which of these is the correct definition of the word 'conjunction'?
Correct answer: A word used to connect clauses or sentences
A word used to separate clauses or sentences
A word used to show a close relationship between clauses or sentences
A word used to show synonyms for clauses or sentences
Q6.
Which of the below is the correct definition for a compound sentence?
Correct answer: A sentence containing two independent clauses linked by a conjunction
A sentence containing only a single clause with a subject and verb
A sentence with a combination of a main clause and a subordinate clause
A sentence that conveys facts and information

6 Questions

Q1.
If a piece of description includes references to the five senses it is known as imagery.
Correct Answer: sensory, Sensory, 'sensory', 'Sensory'
Q2.
Which senses have been used in this example of sensory imagery? 'The gentle rustle of leaves in the breeze created a soothing melody as I savoured the rich taste of hot cocoa.'
Correct answer: sound, taste
sound, smell
sight, sound
touch, taste
Q3.
A sentence that contains a main clause and a subordinate clause is known as a sentence.
Correct Answer: complex, Complex, 'complex', 'Complex'
Q4.
Which of the below are examples of subordinate conjunctions?
and
but
so
Correct answer: because
Correct answer: whilst
Q5.
'The volcano was enormous. As it cast its colossal peak upwards, the clouds seem to cower in fear.' What sentence types have been used here?
Correct answer: simple, complex
simple, compound
compound, complex
complex, compound
complex, complex
Q6.
Which of the below would be suitable alternatives to begin a descriptive sentence instead of the word 'the'?
Correct answer: start with a word ending in 'ing'
Correct answer: start with an adverb
Correct answer: start with a subordinating conjunction
start with a coordinating conjunction
you don't need to replace 'the' with anything