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Considering and evaluating persuasive letters

I can consider the effectiveness of modal verbs, personification and active voice in persuasive letters.

New
New
Year 10
AQA

Considering and evaluating persuasive letters

I can consider the effectiveness of modal verbs, personification and active voice in persuasive letters.

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Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Using words with medium and high modality can convey a sense of confidence and obligation onto your writing.
  2. However, only using words with high modality can make your tone seem too direct.
  3. Using personification can create an emotional connection between the reader and the subject.
  4. Using active voice can ensure the reader's focus is on the subject.

Keywords

  • Persuade - convince (someone) to do something through reasoning or argument

  • Modal verbs - verbs that indicate likelihood, ability, permission or obligation

  • Active voice - where the subject of the sentence performs the action onto the object

  • Direct - moving towards a place or object, without changing direction and without stopping

  • Obligation - an act or course of action to which a person is morally or legally bound; a duty or commitment

Common misconception

That you should always use words with high modality (must, need, have to) to make your writing seem persuasive.

Exclusively using words with high modality can make your tone seem too direct and, therefore, make the reader feel defensive.

If you have time, you could ask pupils to rewrite the entirety of Sofia's response.
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Equipment

You will need access to a copy of the model answers used in this lesson. You can find them in the additional materials.

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
'The attribution of a personal nature or human characteristics to something non-human' is the definition of .
Correct Answer: personification
Q2.
'To convince (someone) to do something through reasoning or argument' is the definition of which word beginning with 'p'?
Correct Answer: persuade, persuasive
Q3.
In formal letter writing, where does the recipient's address appear?
on the right-hand side
in the middle
Correct answer: on the left-hand side
Q4.
'Verbs that indicate likelihood, ability, permission or obligation' are known as verbs.
Correct Answer: modal
Q5.
In formal letter writing, if you used 'Dear Sir or Madam' as the salutation, then you should use which of the following as the sign off?
Kind regards
Yours sincerely
Correct answer: Yours faithfully
Q6.
'Where the subject of the sentence performs the action onto the object' is the definition of voice.
Correct Answer: active

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of the following sentences uses personification to evoke a negative reaction?
'The words seemed to dance and swirl before my eyes.'
'The words seemed to reach out their hand to me.'
Correct answer: 'The words seemed to glance dismissively at me.'
'The words seemed to glance admiringly at me.'
Q2.
'Moving towards a place or object, without changing direction and without stopping' is the definition of which of the following words?
indirect
Correct answer: direct
deviate
Q3.
'Where the object is acted upon by the subject of the sentence' is the definition of voice.
Correct Answer: passive
Q4.
'An act or course of action to which a person is morally or legally bound; a duty or commitment' is the definition of which word?
Correct Answer: obligation
Q5.
Which of the following is an example of using active voice?
Correct answer: 'The students read Shakespeare's plays.'
'The Shakespeare plays are read by the students.'
'Shakespeare plays are enjoyed by the students.'
Q6.
Exclusively using words with high modality can make your persuasive writing too ...
uncertain
passive
Correct answer: direct

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