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Year 10
AQA

Considering and using active and passive voice in persuasive letter writing

I can identify and analyse the effects of active and passive voice and consider in which circumstances which is more effective.

New
New
Year 10
AQA

Considering and using active and passive voice in persuasive letter writing

I can identify and analyse the effects of active and passive voice and consider in which circumstances which is more effective.

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Key learning points

  1. We might see active voice as more direct, concise and confident.
  2. We could see passive voice as less direct, more detached and objective.
  3. Potentially, we might see active voice as more appropriate in more persuasive writing circumstances.
  4. However, we might use passive voice if we want to avoid responsibility or make a complaint.

Keywords

  • Active voice - where the subject of the sentence performs the action onto the object

  • Passive voice - where the object is acted upon by the subject of the sentence

  • Direct - moving towards a place or object, without changing direction and without stopping

  • Subtle - making use of indirect methods to achieve something

  • Objective - not influenced by personal feelings or opinions in considering and representing facts

Common misconception

That the connection between the subject and object of a sentence doesn't matter in persuasive writing.

Using active or passive voice can affect the tone of your writing and how the reader responds to it.

If you have time, it might be useful to have pupils rewrite their whole letter in passive voice and compare the two so that they can see the difference.
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6 Questions

Q1.
'The person or thing performing the action' in a sentence is the ...
Correct Answer: subject
Q2.
'The person or thing that receives the action of the verb' in a sentence is the ...
Correct Answer: object
Q3.
In the sentence 'William Shakespeare wrote 'Hamlet.', which word is the subject?
Correct answer: William Shakespeare
wrote
Hamlet
Q4.
In the sentence 'The book 'Jane Eyre' was written by Charlotte Brontë.' which word is the object?
Correct answer: Jane Eyre
written
Charlotte Brontë
Q5.
'A form of non-fiction writing that is written to persuade a reader of a belief, opinion or idea' is the definition of writing.
Correct Answer: persuasive, persuasion
Q6.
'Not influenced by personal feelings or opinions in considering and representing facts' is the definition of __________.
subjective
Correct answer: objective
constructive

6 Questions

Q1.
'Where the subject of the sentence performs the action onto the object' is the definition of voice.
Correct Answer: active
Q2.
'Where the object is acted upon by the subject of the sentence' is the definition of voice.
Correct Answer: passive
Q3.
'Moving towards a place or object, without changing direction and without stopping' is the definition of the following words?
meandering
indirect
Correct answer: direct
Q4.
'Making use of indirect methods to achieve something' is the definition of which word beginning with 's'?
Correct Answer: subtle
Q5.
Which of the following do we typically associate with active voice?
Correct answer: confidence
objectiveness
detachment
Q6.
Which of the following might passive voice be appropriate for?
Writing a letter to the headteacher to convince them to abolish homework.
Correct answer: Writing a letter to a company to complain about a product you received.
Writing a letter to your MP to request more social housing.