Revising and editing 'Animal farm' essays
I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay.
Revising and editing 'Animal farm' essays
I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay.
Lesson details
Key learning points
- Topic sentences need to be clear and linked to the question.
- Main and supporting quotations from the text are used to justify arguments.
- Responses should avoid re-telling the plot.
- Revising and editing your essays is an important part of the writing process.
- Analysis should be linked to the writer’s purpose and comment on choices.
Keywords
Cohesive - In writing, if the structure is cohesive it is clear how the parts fit together. It has a clear introduction, middle and conclusion.
Chronological - To arrange things in the order of which they happen in time.
Discourse marker - A word or phrase which organises writing into clear sections and ideas.
Elevate - You are elevating something if you are making it higher, or in the case of writing making it better.
Common misconception
Once an essay is completed it's not worth thinking about again.
Revisiting our own essays can make feedback become really personalised and allow you to work and focus on your own targets.
Equipment
You will need access to a copy of 'Animal Farm' by George Orwell.
Content guidance
- Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).
Lesson video
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Starter quiz
6 Questions
"a majestic-looking pig"
"was now a mature boar of twenty-four stone"
"was best at writing"
"the foolish, pretty white mare"
"the oldest animal on the farm and the worst tempered"
"a stout motherly mare"