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Planning a written response on Edexcel conflict poetry

I can use a multiple paragraph outline to plan a written response.

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Planning a written response on Edexcel conflict poetry

I can use a multiple paragraph outline to plan a written response.

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Key learning points

  1. The anthology poems all arguably consider conflict and its impact on the people who experience it.
  2. The poems that you choose to compare should both be linked to the focus and nuances of the question you are asked.
  3. It is useful to consider the similarities between poems and then consider any subtle differences between them.
  4. Concluding sentences should have a sharp focus on the writer’s intention.

Keywords

  • Complement - when something supports something else or makes it more effective

  • Contrast - if one thing contrasts with another, it is very different from it

  • Intention - the reason or purpose behind a decision or action

  • Thesis - a central argument or main idea that a writer develops and supports in their work

Common misconception

You should always write about the poem you know best.

You should write about the two poems that form the best complementary pairing for the question.

In order to stretch and challenge students, you could consider allowing them to choose both poems for Task C.
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Equipment

You will need access to a copy of the Edexcel Conflict GCSE Poetry Anthology.

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Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour
  • Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
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Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

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Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
When we compare we look for ...
similarities only
differences only
Correct answer: both similarities and differences
Q2.
What key ideas does the poem 'Half-caste' by John Agard explore?
Correct answer: identity and culture
Correct answer: prejudice
war
inner conflict
Correct answer: interpersonal conflict
Q3.
Which other poem in the Edexcel Conflict poetry anthology would compare well with 'Half-caste' as it explores the effects of racial conflict?
'Belfast Confetti'
'What Were They Like?'
'The Class Game'
Correct answer: 'No Problem'
Q4.
Starting with the first, put the following sections of a multiple paragraph outline in chronological order.
1 - thesis statement
2 - topic sentence
3 - supporting detail
4 - concluding sentence
5 - conclusion
Q5.
What is the role of a thesis statement?
Correct answer: to outline the argument of whole essay
to outline the arguments of each paragraph
to summarise the argument in each paragraph
to give a conclusive summary of the writer's message
Q6.
If something is nuanced it is ...
showing something supports something else.
Correct answer: showing a slight difference in meaning.
showing an obvious difference between two things.

6 Questions

Q1.
Match the keywords with their definitions.
Correct Answer:Complement,when something supports something else or makes it more effective
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when something supports something else or makes it more effective

Correct Answer:Contrast ,an obvious difference between two things
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an obvious difference between two things

Correct Answer:Intention,the reason or purpose behind a decision or action
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the reason or purpose behind a decision or action

Q2.
Match the key elements of a multiple paragraph outline with their function.
Correct Answer:thesis,outline argument of whole essay
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outline argument of whole essay

Correct Answer:topic sentence,outline arguments of each paragraph
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outline arguments of each paragraph

Correct Answer:supporting detail,key language, form, structure or contextual detail
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key language, form, structure or contextual detail

Correct Answer:concluding sentence,summarise argument in each paragraph
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summarise argument in each paragraph

Correct Answer:conclusion,conclusive summary of writer's message
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conclusive summary of writer's message

Q3.
If considering the idea of injustice, which poems from the Edexcel Conflict poetry anthology could you choose to compare with 'No Problem'?
Correct answer: 'The Class Game'
'The Destruction of Sennacherib'
Correct answer: 'Half-caste'
'A Poison Tree'
Q4.
A concluding sentence should …
rephrase the topic sentence.
give your opinion about the poem.
Correct answer: have a sharp focus on the writer's purpose.
Q5.
Topic sentences should ...
Correct answer: outline arguments in each paragraph.
include contextual detail.
Correct answer: include key question vocabulary.
Q6.
It is useful to consider the similarities between poems and then consider on any subtle between them.
Correct Answer: differences

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