Using figurative language, precise verbs and perspective to write with flair
I can identify how model answers meet the ambitious success criteria.
Using figurative language, precise verbs and perspective to write with flair
I can identify how model answers meet the ambitious success criteria.
Lesson details
Key learning points
- Excellent descriptions and narratives will focus on describing details, rather than trying to write too much
- Figurative language should be used to create vivid images of what is being described
- Adding detailed description is often more valuable than plot points, in creating tension
- Using semantic fields and extended metaphors can add cohesion to creative writing
Common misconception
Students think that they need to describe everything in a setting.
Ask students to 'bounce' around a scene, only describing the most influential and important aspects of it.
Keywords
Syntax - Syntax is the grammatical structuring of words in a specific order to make a sentence.
Realm - A realm is a kingdom or empire.
Sentinel - A sentinel is a guard who keeps watch over something.
Stoic - Somebody stoic can endure pain or hardship without showing their true emotions.
Metropolis - A metropolis is a large or significant city.
Equipment
You will need a copy of the model answer used for this lesson. You will find it available in the additional materials.
Content guidance
- Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).
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