New
New
Year 10
Eduqas

Creating a written narrative response

I can plan, write and proofread a complete narrative piece of writing.

New
New
Year 10
Eduqas

Creating a written narrative response

I can plan, write and proofread a complete narrative piece of writing.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. We need to plan our creative writing to ensure it is clear, cohesive and engaging.
  2. We can use a range of language and structural techniques to craft our writing.
  3. Single paragraph outlines can be used to plan your ideas before you begin writing.
  4. Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work.

Keywords

  • Charred - burned and blackened by fire

  • Remnants - a small piece of something left from a larger original amount

  • Proofread - carefully check for errors in a text before it is published or finished

Common misconception

Proofreading your work is not important if you plan it.

Proofreading is equally important as planning. In pressured writing environments, we can easily make mistakes that we are not aware of.

You can practice writing whilst your students write to build a sense of trust and shared understanding of the difficulties involved in the writing process.
Teacher tip

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of upsetting content
  • Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

Supervision

Adult supervision required

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
What does proofreading mean?
to rewrite an entire piece of work
Correct answer: to read through work and look for any errors
to write down all the spellings for words before you write something
Q2.
Which of these includes an inverted sentence structure?
Correct answer: Tall and proud stood the oak tree.
The oak tree stood tall and proud.
The oak tree was tall, proud and anicent.
Q3.
Which of these uses asyndeton and a climactic sentence structure?
It was humid, suffocating and warm.
It was warm, suffocating, humid.
Correct answer: It was warm, humid, suffocating.
Q4.
Match the time technique to its definition.
Correct Answer:flashback,referring to a past moment in a narrative

referring to a past moment in a narrative

Correct Answer:non-linear narrative,describing events in a different period to that which they occur

describing events in a different period to that which they occur

Correct Answer:time jumps,skipping periods of time in a narrative

skipping periods of time in a narrative

Correct Answer:flashforward,referring to a future moment in a narrative

referring to a future moment in a narrative

Q5.
How can we craft a powerful flashback?
Make the flashback similar to the present moment.
Correct answer: Make the flashback contrast with the present moment.
Make the flashback occur at least 50 years before the present moment.
Q6.
Which of these tangible objects best symbolises hope?
an umbrella
a televison
Correct answer: a lamp

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of these would not be involved in proofreading?
checking your use of punctuation
checking your spellings
Correct answer: rewriting your opening paragraph
Q2.
Which of these would ensure we have planned a piece of work thoroughly?
Correct answer: plan the details of each paragraph
write down all the techniques you will use
plan all the ambitious vocabulary you will use
Q3.
Why is it important to proofread a piece of work?
to make our writing longer
Correct answer: to ensure we correct punctuation, spelling and grammar errors
to add more complex vocabulary, making it harder to understand
Q4.
Starting with the first, put the elements of a single paragraph outline in chronological order.
1 - topic sentence
2 - supporting detail
3 - concluding sentence
Q5.
How can we use paragraphs in an engaging way?
plan each paragraph to describe a random element of a scene
Correct answer: build tension as the paragraphs develop
make sure each paragraph includes five sentences
Q6.
Which sentence uses the word 'remnants' accurately?
'The remnants of the project are due tomorrow.'
Correct answer: 'After the fire, only remnants of the building remained.'
'She prepared the remnants for dinner.'