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      'The War of the Worlds': How punctuation and sentence structures create impact

      Lesson details

      Learning outcome

      I can explain how a writer uses punctuation and sentence structures to create impact.

      Key learning points

      1. Making predictions can help you to comprehend a new text better.
      2. Dashes can be used to add a greater pause for dramatic effect.
      3. Colons are used to separate two main clauses and can introduce lists, explanations and quotes.
      4. Writers use sentence structures and punctuation for emphasis, to change pace and convey emotion.
      5. Use precise quotations to support your analysis of punctuation and sentence structure.

      Keywords

      • Dash - A piece of punctuation (-) that can be used to signal a pause, usually for dramatic effect.

      • Colon - A piece of punctuation (:) that can introduce lists, explanations and quotes.

      • Prediction - A statement about what you think will happen in the future.

      • Sentence structures - The different sentence types e.g. complex, compound, simple.

      • Pace - The speed at which a story is told.

      Common misconception

      Punctuation is only used to ensure writing makes sense.

      Punctuation can be a stylistic choice from a writer, contributing to the tension of a story.

      Teacher tip

      There are lots of great resources for introducing 'The War of the Worlds'. Consider using images/clips to bring the extract to life (particularly around the "red weed" and its impact on London).

      Equipment

      There is a copy of the extract from 'War of the Worlds' available in the additional materials.

      Content guidance

      Depiction or discussion of violence or suffering

      Supervision

      Adult supervision required

      Licence

      This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2025), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0
      except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions
      (Collection 2).

      Lesson video

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      Prior knowledge starter quiz

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      A simple sentence has a single clause with a subject and a .

      Correct answer: verb
      preposition
      noun
      metaphor

      Q2.
      What is being described here: 'Fiction based on imagined future scientific or technological advances or major social or environmental changes.'?

      Correct Answer: Science fiction, science fiction, Science-fiction, Sci-fi, sci fi

      Q3.
      'The rocket launched successfully and it made its way to the moon.' This is a compound sentence joined by a conjunction. What is the conjunction?

      Correct Answer: and, And, 'and'

      Q4.
      'The rocket launched loudly, screeching wildly into the night.' What sentence type is this?

      compound
      Correct answer: complex
      simple
      interrogative
      exclamative

      Q5.
      A story's pace refers to the at which it is told.

      Correct answer: speed
      volume
      tension
      time

      Q6.
      What is being described here: 'A statement about what you think will happen in the future'?

      certainty
      Correct answer: prediction
      truth
      likelihood

      6 Questions

      Q1.
      Who wrote 'The War of the Worlds'?

      Correct answer: H.G. Wells
      Jules Verne
      Mary Shelley
      Jonathan Swift

      Q2.
      'The War of the Worlds' is narrated by ...

      Correct answer: an unnamed narrator.
      Wells himself.
      a Martian who was part of the invasion.
      nobody (it is written in the third person).

      Q3.
      What is being described here: 'A piece of punctuation that can introduce lists, explanations and quotes.'?

      Correct answer: colon
      dash
      ellipsis
      question mark

      Q4.
      In 'The War of the Worlds', the narrator finds London has become like a 'lurid' and 'weird' alien landscape. What is arguably the cause of this?

      Correct answer: A red weed that is seemingly everywhere.
      The fact that it is now Martians one sees rather than humans.
      The complete destruction the Martians have carried out.
      The new buildings and structures the Martians have constructed.

      Q5.
      Look at this sentence taken from 'The War of the Worlds': "And over all—silence." Which of the below best explains the use of the dash?

      It is essential for the sentence to make sense.
      Correct answer: It adds a dramatic pause which greater emphasises the silence.
      It reflects the fact the character is nervously stuttering when he says it.
      The writer uses the dash to quicken the pace.

      Q6.
      In 'The War of the Worlds', the narrator talks of being 'dethroned'. What does he mean by this?

      Correct answer: That humans are no longer the most dominant species on Earth.
      That the invasion has led to the collapse of the government.
      That he has lost everything.
      That human society will never be the same again.

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