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Year 10
Eduqas

Planning a well-structured response

I can use a single paragraph outline to plan and write a response to an extract.

New
New
Year 10
Eduqas

Planning a well-structured response

I can use a single paragraph outline to plan and write a response to an extract.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Topic sentences must clearly reference the author and concisely summarise your ideas
  2. Quotes should be judiciously chosen from the breadth of the text and be analytically rich
  3. Closing sentences must clearly answer the original question
  4. Discourse markers can be used throughout paragraphs to organise and signpost your ideas

Common misconception

Planning is not essential for writing responses and doesn't need to be practiced.

How might planning be used as a more efficient way to practice writing responses? How can it help in preparing for a variety of responses?

Keywords

  • Judicious - To be judicious is to make good and informed decisions.

  • Addiction - Having an addiction means a person can’t stop using a substance or engaging in a specific activity

  • Perspective - A perspective is the way someone thinks or feels about a particular thing.

  • Adolescence - Adolescence is the period between being a teenager and becoming an adult.

  • Turbulent - If something is turbulent it is chaotic and unstable.

Have your own examples of good planning for a variety of difference responses to explore similarities and differences in approach. Enable students to see how planning can be adapted for a range of difference responses.
Teacher tip

Equipment

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of upsetting content
  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
  • Depiction or discussion of mental health issues

Supervision

Adult supervision required

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is the correct definition of 'solitary'?
Noisy and crowded
Correct answer: Alone and isolated
Active and energetic
Afraid and anxious
Q2.
Which word is a synonym for 'disciplined'?
Disordered
Chaotic
Random
Correct answer: Organised
Q3.
What is the role of a topic sentence?
To provide evidence and examples
To conclude a paragraph
Correct answer: To introduce the main idea in a paragraph
To be entertaining
Q4.
Complete this sentence: Conjunctions are used to_______
end a paragraph.
add punctuation to sentences.
Correct answer: link ideas together.
ask a question.
Q5.
Which one of these is not included in a good summary?
Embedded quotes
Comparative topic sentences
Inference
Explanation
Correct answer: Analysis
Q6.
Pick words to complete this sentence. Embedded quotes should be ...
Correct answer: precise
general
Correct answer: relevant
Correct answer: short

6 Questions

Q1.
Which verb means "a person can't stop using a substance or engaging in a particular behaviour"?
turbulent
judicious
perspective
Correct answer: addiction
Q2.
Which words are synonyms for the word turbulent?
Correct answer: Chaotic
Fast
Correct answer: Unstable
Joyful
Q3.
Which features do you not include in a topic sentence?
The writer's name
Correct answer: Conclusive conjunction
A summary of your main idea
Correct answer: A list of techniques the writer has used
Q4.
Which statements best describe judiciously chosen quotes?
long and descriptive
Correct answer: analytically rich
Correct answer: chosen from the breadth of the text
Correct answer: demonstrate a range
Q5.
Which of these words is not a conclusive discourse marker?
Thus
Finally
Therefore
Correct answer: Initially
Q6.
Which section of the single outline paragraph is missing in this list: topic sentence, __________, closing sentence.
Correct Answer: supporting details, quotes, evidence, evidence from text

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