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Planning the climax of ‘Lucky Dip'
I can plan the climax of 'Lucky Dip'.
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Year 2
Planning the climax of ‘Lucky Dip'
I can plan the climax of 'Lucky Dip'.
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Lesson details
Key learning points
- The purpose of the climax is to describe the problem and create the highest point of tension.
- Our plan will contain ambitious vocabulary.
- Our plan will contain nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs.
- Using ambitious vocabulary helps to paint a vivid picture in the reader’s mind and make writing exciting to read.
Keywords
Ambitious vocabulary - high-level language in writing that meets the text purpose
Planning - creating a framework before writing a section or whole text
Common misconception
Pupils may find it hard to remember all the action in the climax.
Teach pupils to break down the climax into smaller sections and then focus on what happened in that section. Provide children will printed images from the animation, to support them with planning their climax.
To ensure pupils have a strong understanding of the events in the climax, you may want to use a drama game such as 'freeze frames' to get the pupils to act out the key moments in advance of this lesson.
Teacher tip
Equipment
You need access to the 2001 animation ‘Lucky Dip’ by Emily Skinner for this lesson.
Licence
This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on
Open Government Licence version 3.0
except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).Lesson video
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Starter quiz
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6 Questions
Q1.
Where does Emily enter in the build-up?
a beach hut
a fish restaurant
Q2.
Who does Emily see first in the arcade?
her gandparents
the bunny
Q3.
What does Emily do when she sees the Pin Man?
She talks to him.
She waves at him.
Q4.
What is so special about the bunny Emily sees in the Lucky Dipper machine?
He is very soft.
He is holding a gold coin.
Q5.
Why does Emily leave the arcade?
She is scared of the bunny.
The Pin Mn carries her out.
Q6.
Fronted adverbials of time will need which of these after it?
a full stop
a question mark
Exit quiz
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6 Questions
Q1.
Put these parts of a story staircase in the correct order.
Q2.
What is the most exciting part of a story structure?
opening
build-up
resolution
Q3.
Which of these is a purpose of the climax?
to describe the setting
to describe the main characters
Q4.
Which of these is another purpose of the climax?
to introduce the problem
to resolve any problems and end the story
Q5.
In the climax, how does the Lucky Dipper machine become smashed?
Emily pushes it over.
The bunny pushes it over.
Q6.
What does Emily land on when she falls through the hole?
rocks
grass