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Year 7

Writing a diary in the voice of Miranda from Shakespeare's 'The Tempest'

I can write an accurate, thoughtful diary entry in the voice of Miranda.

New
New
Year 7

Writing a diary in the voice of Miranda from Shakespeare's 'The Tempest'

I can write an accurate, thoughtful diary entry in the voice of Miranda.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. A diary is a person’s private record of events, thoughts, or feelings that are written down every day.
  2. A diary should be written in first person narrative voice and past tense.
  3. A diary is usually written in chronological order.
  4. Using descriptions that show the senses can help to create a convincing character voice.
  5. We don’t know what happens to Miranda after the end of the play.

Keywords

  • Convincing - If something is convincing then it’s able to make you believe that it’s true or real.

  • Chronological - Chronological order means following the order in which a series of events happened.

  • Isolated - Being isolated means being away from people and other places in a remote place.

  • Society - A society is a large group of people who live together in an organised way.

Common misconception

That creative writing should be in present tense.

Because diaries are records of events that have happened, they should be written in past tense.

You could ask the students to complete the writing of the diary as homework or as the next lesson if there isn't enough time to complete it in this lesson.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You may want a copy of Shakespeare's 'The Tempest' for this lesson.

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

Lesson video

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6 Questions

Q1.
What situation does the use of past tense signify?
Correct answer: a situation that has already happened
a situation that is currently happening
a situation that will happen
Q2.
What is a diary?
Correct answer: a chronological record of what someone experiences
a speech designed to persuade people
an informative article about current news
Q3.
What is first person narrative?
Correct answer: one character sharing experiences that are happening to them
a god-like narrator giving the reader context
a narrator telling the story through a protagonist and referring to them by name
Q4.
In Shakespeare's 'The Tempest', which of the following is true of Miranda's experience?
Correct answer: For twelve years, she lived on the island with only her father and Caliban.
While on the island, she and Prospero had many visitors.
For one year, she lived on the island with only her father and Caliban.
Q5.
The five senses are: taste, touch, smell, sight and .
Correct Answer: hearing, Hearing, sound
Q6.
Which sense does the following sentence appeal to: 'The stone was cool under my palm'.
taste
Correct answer: touch
hearing
smell

6 Questions

Q1.
Which of the following sentences is written in first person narrative voice?
Correct answer: I heard the waves break on the side of the boat.
She heard the waves break on the side of the boat.
Miranda heard the waves break on the side of the boat.
Q2.
Which of the following sentences appeals to the sense of sight?
Correct answer: The sudden appearance of the sun temporarily blinded me.
The crash of the waves shook me from my sleep.
The scent of freshly baked bread made my mouth water.
Q3.
If you live in an isolated place, then you...
Correct answer: don't live near to other people
are constantly around other people
live in a very untidy and unclean place.
Q4.
If something is convincing then it is...
hard to believe
Correct answer: easy to believe
far from reality
Q5.
A large group of people who live together in an organised way is a...
Correct answer: society
nomad
government
Q6.
If an account is written in which the order is following the series of events as they happened then it is written in order.
Correct Answer: chronological, Chronological