Writing a ‘Leave Taking’ essay on the character of Viv and ideas of belonging
I can write an analytical essay about how Winsome Pinnock uses the character of Viv to explore ideas about belonging in ‘Leave Taking’.
Writing a ‘Leave Taking’ essay on the character of Viv and ideas of belonging
I can write an analytical essay about how Winsome Pinnock uses the character of Viv to explore ideas about belonging in ‘Leave Taking’.
Lesson details
Key learning points
- Use the essay question as a planning tool by annotating its keywords.
- Create a detailed plan which includes a clear thesis, and focused topic sentences.
- A thesis is your overarching argument.
- A topic sentence states the paragraph’s main idea.
- Essays should follow a structure: introduction, main body paragraphs, conclusion.
Common misconception
All planning should be in note form.
Foundations of your essay - thesis and topic sentences - should be written in full so you know they are powerful, precise and purposeful.
Keywords
Thesis - The overarching argument to an essay, supported by the entire text.
Eurocentric - When there is a focus on European culture or history, ignoring or excluding cultures and history from the wider world.
Dislocation - A feeling of being out of place, or in the wrong place.
Belonging - The feeling that you are accepted in a group, community or society.
Specific - A precise detail.
Equipment
You need access to a copy of Winsome Pinnock's 'Leave Taking' published by Nick Hern Books.
Content guidance
- Contains strong language
- Depiction or discussion of discriminatory behaviour
- Depiction or discussion of sensitive content
Supervision
Adult supervision recommended
Licence
This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).
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Starter quiz
6 Questions
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Tells Del she skipped one of her English exams
Exit quiz
6 Questions
moves from the general to the specific, includes your thesis
first sentence of each paragraph stating its main idea
exploration of moments, quotations and methods from the text
last sentence of each paragraph; focus on writer's intention
moves from the specific to the general; focus on the writer
overarching argument supported by the whole text
first sentence of the paragraph stating your main idea
references to the text
final sentence of a paragraph, concluding your idea
sums up your essay's overall thesis