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Year 10
AQA

Writing a comparative response on Worlds and Lives poetry

I can create a written response which meets a success criteria.

New
New
Year 10
AQA

Writing a comparative response on Worlds and Lives poetry

I can create a written response which meets a success criteria.

Lesson details

Key learning points

  1. Topic sentences must be comparative when comparing texts.
  2. Comparisons should be made between ideas, intentions, themes, and messages.
  3. Correlative and comparative conjunctions are a good way to signpost your comparative writing.
  4. Within paragraphs, evidence can move back and forth between the two poems and be linked with connectives.
  5. Drawing a direct comparison of quotations should take place at least once across the essay.

Common misconception

That you should write about each poem separately.

While writing about one poem at a time is one way to approach a comparison, it's usually more effective to weave your comparisons of the poems through the whole answer.

Keywords

  • Discourse marker - a word or phrase used to link ideas and signpost the direction of the writing

  • Comparative - measured or judged by estimating the similarity or dissimilarity between one thing and another

  • Inference - a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning

  • Topic sentence - explains the focus or main idea of an analytical paragraph

You might like to give the students sentence starters in order to help them start and structure their writing.
Teacher tip

Equipment

You will need a copy of the AQA Worlds and Lives anthology.

Content guidance

  • Depiction or discussion of sensitive content

Supervision

Adult supervision recommended

Licence

This content is © Oak National Academy Limited (2024), licensed on Open Government Licence version 3.0 except where otherwise stated. See Oak's terms & conditions (Collection 2).

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6 Questions

Q1.
What is the poem 'Name Journeys' about?
The speaker has a conversation about their experience of migration.
Correct answer: The speaker explores their experience of migration to Manchester.
The speaker explores their experience of injustice they faced as a child.
Q2.
Textual detail in a written response is ...
Correct answer: the evidence you use to support your answer
the detail you put into an answer
how detailed the writer has been in their text
Q3.
Which example is comparative?
Whereas Seneviratne explores human connection.
Eliot explored the impact of the Industrial Revolution.
Correct answer: Both Eliot and Seneviratne explore the impact of the Industrial Revolution.
Q4.
Starting with the first, order the elements of a single paragraph outline in to chronological order.
1 - topic sentence
2 - supporting details
3 - concluding sentence
Q5.
A conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning is known as an .
Correct Answer: inference
Q6.
Which of these are examples of comparative discourse markers?
Correct answer: likewise
furthermore
thus
Correct answer: contrastingly

6 Questions

Q1.
Match the key terms to their definitions.
Correct Answer:discourse marker,a word or phrase whose job is to organise writing

a word or phrase whose job is to organise writing

Correct Answer:comparative ,showing similarities or differences

showing similarities or differences

Correct Answer:inference ,a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning

a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning

Correct Answer:topic sentence,explains the focus or main idea of an analytical paragraph

explains the focus or main idea of an analytical paragraph

Q2.
When writing a comparative response you should …
Correct answer: weave ideas about both poems into paragraphs
always include one poem only in each paragraph
begin comparing a key quote
Q3.
When comparing two texts ...
Correct answer: evidence can move back and forth between the two poems
Correct answer: ideas should be linked with connectives
there should only be 1 quotation per paragraph
Q4.
Which of these options is a correct pair of correlative conjunctions?
Correct answer: neither/nor
neither/and
both/nor
Correct answer: both/and
Q5.
__________ must be comparative when comparing texts.
context
Correct answer: topic sentences
discourse markers
Q6.
When comparing poems your comparisons should focus on ...
methods
quotations
Correct answer: big ideas

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